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Bonitaj
Bonitaj
Aug 14, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

GETTING SMALLER

                                                                
The tinierthe point of the needle the more easily it threads through  the thinner the blade of the sword the more swiftly it cuts in two the smaller my love shrinksthe sooner I'll be over you BjR 14 08 '09
— Bonitaj, Aug 14, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

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doorman

doorman

16 years 9 months ago

Sharp

A very acute write, Bonita. No more words needed,- your poem, or from me. Yours, Espen.
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 9 months ago

SHORT & SHARP!

Thanks for your comments gentlemen! Appreciate your stopping by :) Boni