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An Appreciative Effort

Embraced name
of my certain pain
into the pool I dive,

it accompanies me
through my journey
and reminds me I'm alive.

I sing out loud
to the maddening crowd
things are just as they seem,

what hurts my heart
tears me apart
for when I wake it's not a dream.

I understand
that a life too bland
will silently slip away,

and lost you'll be
when you finally see
how reality owns the day.

I've seen it all
even grown men crawl
after admonishing these words,

be on your guard
a life worthwhile is hard
and easy's for the birds.

I speak my mind
and my heart I find
allows a certain peace,

for I cherish you
with all that you do
and that joy will never cease.
— docmaverick, Aug 14, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

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odiumscurse

16 years 9 months ago

Flowing prestige!

Smooth titel, all was a great read. PHENOM:T.S
B

Baz

16 years 9 months ago

Hi Doc

I enjoyed reading this, life as it really is? Baz
AW

Antoinette Mar…

16 years 9 months ago

I too, enjoyed ....

each and every word...very well written..however It made my eyes leak a bit...thanks again Doc....as always...you describe things to a tee
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Another great write Doc

That , I think, would make a wonderful ballad .. Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 9 months ago

I was....

...in a bit of an "odd" mood, when I penned this one. Thank you sooo much for the attractive comments, to you all ! I really do appreciate the positive feedback. "Write On"! sincerely, #{:>{)}8==== docmaverick.