Freedom (haiku)

For two weeks, two days
my soul will be mine again
not SUNY Dutchess's

— infinite_dwarf, Aug 13, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

Critiques

Eduardo Cruz

16 years 9 months ago

Jess,

Question, You don't have to do any reading for school in the off time, I ask because my daughters had to read even on their off time, so it's kind of being on a leash. Off total, I think not! Good for you anyway. Eddie

bungalogic

16 years 9 months ago

I dig it but....

Hey what's up infinite.... I have say to how much I love Haikus. and this haiku is pretty good. the subject matter and such is understanding thanks to your explanation. A haiku is 5 7 5 the way I read your haiku was that the last line is 6 sylllables not five. Jiamari is the exeption at times but... what are your thoughts keep on writing as whole it's cool bungalogic creator of runopians