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Grooves on Vinyl

My mother played music to me in the womb. [It disfigured me only little: waves of sound are burned into my fingertips.] It must have been music. It must have been its deep rhythms against her stomach that made me imagine that I felt the world kick beneath the hand I held to the wall of her womb.
— Diatom Shells, Aug 13, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Rarely have I ever read a

Rarely have I ever read a poet who constantly ventures into uncharted territory with their poems. I applaud you and am ever your devoted fan. Thank you. ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
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Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

yes..

that's wear im most comfortable treading on dark matter in the cosmos. thank you anna and I ditto your comment I will always be a fan of you and many others here. im glad to call this place a home since I've been quite a vagabond. -diatom shells
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

16 years 10 months ago

Dia,

Everything that Anna said, I second! " reporting live via satellite directly from the womb, here's our corespondent Diatom Shell" you go girl!! thanks always, Eddie
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orgami

16 years 10 months ago

she made me talk to our unborn still in my work clothes/boots

Chloe the rebel poet rocker would jump and kick at the start of my tales of the day The Pokey dogs clamboured too and Miss Kitty the stripped cat Tim Hortons for Carolee I had forgotten so much but shards come back like a fist shattered mirror hued with bright red guilt
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Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

thats..

a sweet memory. I would always sing to them in the womb and they would go berserk little performers they are. thank you beautiful man of clear words. -diatom shells
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Ink Dragon

16 years 9 months ago

Diatom Shells,

music is indeed woven into your very matter, I can feel your words vibrating. Where have you been hiding for so long? Glad that you eventually turned up here to share your words! Yours, ~Nina
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Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

lol...hiding

thank you nina, i havent been hiding really just never found a home so i will settle here for now. -diatom shells
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

Music

my mother played the radio quite a bit when she was expecting me. I wonder if that is why music is such a big part of my soul. A brilliant write. Always, Cat
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Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

i've heard..

if you play classical music while babys are in the womb they have a higher IQ. personally, I sang a jewish lullaby in hebrew to my first, somewhere over the rainbow to my second, and Adele [amazing singer] to my third and they are all musically inclined. thank you miss cat. -diatom shells
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Diatom Shells

I am in awe of this poem its beauty ... is brilliant ... Love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

thank you...

jayne I am an awe of your eyes you got some beauties don'tcha I have boring brown eyes but people always say they look red hmmm... all I see is brown. well I am glad u liked this my crazy imagination always running wild I wrote a poem about that too my wild thoughts anywho going dancing tonight wish me good luck-diatom shells salsa dancing her way to the shower
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odd molly

16 years 9 months ago

Lovely to see such a

Lovely to see such a wonderful poem in the spotlight. I love the the title and idea and your style of writing.. (and also when I was expecting my son I played the same music everyday at a certain time and was sure he could hear it.. when he was born I continued to play the same music every day at the same time. and now when he has got 19 he is studying music and it is a great part of his life..) I love your lines: *It must have been its deep rhythms against her stomach that made me imagine that I felt the world kick beneath the hand I held to the wall of her womb.* just wonderful. Love. odd Molly
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Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

hi...

yes music has a part in every humans life. it has healing properties even! I am delighted that you read and enjoyed this thank you for taking the time to comment. the title for me was interesting because I had read this poem to my grandma and she said, oh, fingerprints, and looked down at her hands and finished, kinda like grooves on a record. so I give her credit for that. -diatom shells
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orgami

16 years 9 months ago

"disfigured me only a little.."

So glad elders are important in your works youth is theory mid age is finding out all my theories were somewhat off a few lightyears only music is everything my mother whom adopted me sang always and had records would do housework with them singing along while vacuming Love that line in your poem and the reference to the grooves Im always writing about the "whorls" of the galaxies like smudged fingerprints of god
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Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

beautifully ...

stated! your mother sounds like me I will sing all the time and sometimes I set the kids on the couch and take my duster as a microphone and perform for them and they sit so still in awe of me you will never find anyone that will look at you the way your babies do. it makes you feel like its just you and them and the rest of the world disappears. a look of holy satifaction. -diatom shells