Three Haikus To Honor Our Friend Raven

I liked it but definitely would liked to have had more. It is almost as if those lines wore you out. The one way I would accept it's brevity is, If you switched the first and second verses around in order. ~ Geezer

first, I don't think you know this, haiku is about nature and senryu is like a haiku but it is about a person. What you have written are senyru. An easy mistake to make. Were you trying for eight syllables in the second line of the first senryu? These are lovely and do justice to the sweet and talented, Raven. Good job. Always, Cat

This is enchanting... Don't worry... I am a Solitary Raven... Few people will confuse me with your Raven. You're title does the Bird of Magick, honor. If you're uncomfortable with the confusion; you could add the word: "The" to Raven (...Our Friend The Raven) It's YOUR poem, so have fun with it! Whatever you call it... it's very beautiful. Bright Weavings, Raven (The Lone One; The Solitary Night Raven. Not to be confused with anyone's Title. )

twas nice, clearly centered an evening venture I enjoyed reading Mantiscepter ps. thanx for your comment on ( DEATH )