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DARK COUNTRY

DARK COUNTRY

 

In the past, before Michael Faraday

We lit torches and held candles

Oil lamps led our winding paths

Darkness hung heavy in the night

 

Lightening is the passion of the air

And earth with her magnetic pull

Hinted the coming of electricity

Darkness was pushed to the brink

 

We built dams and gas turbines

To engender the power of light

As it is done elsewhere all over

In the advanced world of men

 

We have a situation here, you see

Nothing seems to work at all

Imported generators are everywhere

Imagine the ocean of wasted fuel

 

From the nation’s electric company

Never expect power always

For it holds what it can not give

And a problem has changed name

 

Hear what the acronyms say-

Never expect power, NEP

Please light candles, PLC

For our world is in darkness

 

Take the cost of running generators

Carbon monoxide polluting our space

Amongst the world proud black people

In heat and mosquito dance at night

 

I heard them say…the giant,

Is the heart of African continent

But ours is the darkest country

Searching for light …



 


— t. reflexion, Aug 12, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 10 months ago

Hey T.

This is powerful. I like the flow, the kind of dryness of your words, and the slight humor (PLC cracked me up!) coupled with the anger and desperation that counterpoints the hope for the future at the beginning so beautifully. And the last verse, I love the layered meaning, its wonderful. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years 10 months ago

Jim

Thank you very much for your insightful comments and for sparing time to go through the author's 'dry' words. I don't know if you have any idea about the frustration we face concerning steady supply of electricity in this country, blessed all round, to say the least. Huge amount of money is pumped into this sector, yet it is not working. Please permit me to share this joke with you. First, we had Electric Company of Nigeria - ECN, which was renamed National Electric Power Authority - NEPA, it was later changed to National Electric Power PLC (Public Limited Company) - NEP plc, in line with the government privatization and commercialization program. This electric company is now called Power Holding Company of Nigeria - PHCN. NOTE: Because of the inefficiency of the electric company, some people change the meanings of the acronyms thus: ECN - ? NEPA - Never Expect Power Always NEP plc - Never Expect Power, please light candle PHCN - Problem Has Changed Name Best wishes T.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years 8 months ago

Yes, funny, but...

Yes, funny, but... very serious as this phenomenon has created holes in the pockets. Your profile picture gives me the impression of Sango, the god of thunder, use by our National Electric Power Authority, NEPA, though this one seems to be holding a book, Sango holds an axe. Thank you for the comments and for the reading. Best wishes. T.