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SAKTHEEE2007
Aug 12, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My Poetries for a Dark [Nights]

My Poetries for a dark  [Night]

 

Dark is there as my mother

To keep me in rest in bed

She heals my pains  and

Wipes my tears from my cheeks

Her gentle breeze makes me to forget my worries

Yes she is my Mother

Her Moon light and star glitters

Makes me to enrich my confidence and hope

Smooth clouds and chilled air

Makes me to lie in bed

She feeds my strength through my sleep and

Makes me  strong to survive in the day

She is very close to my lids and

very near to my dreams

My hands will write many for her

To praise her mercy and love as many epics

 

 

Saktheee S Ravichandran 

 


— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 12, 2009

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greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Sir

I love the dark. This poem is important to me
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tarcus

16 years 10 months ago

freeform

I have made a few comments today about the subject of punctuation or more over the lack of it in use in freeform writing. It takes just a minute to browse and decide where punctuation should be but none have used it. I have taken the liberty of using punctuation within your first stanza to try and explain how much more powerful your words can be... Dark is there as my mother; To keep me in rest in bed. She heals my pains, Wipes my tears from my cheeks. Her gentle breeze makes me forget my worries. Yes; She is my Mother!