spirit light ( edit)

a bit like astro travelling, a good little write. Thank you for this :)fleur

I enjoyed this very much, Ziggy. I think it would have more impact with an adjusted display. Would you consider reworking the lines, punctuation, and capitalization a little bit? ----------------------- You wrote: Through the circle of light walk through the white , where beginning meets end in one continuous bend find your self inside yourself allow your self to feed your mind , carry the torch shedding its light walk through the secret city of white . ----------------------------- I came up with the following. Feel free to take it if you like. Through the circle of light walk through the white where beginning meets end in one continuous bend Find your self inside yourself allow your self to feed your mind carry the torch shedding its light walk through the secret city of white