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Winters version


In  summer a metamorphose
Of  subconscious  submits
To the warmth of the suns rays.

Sublime ,  subcontrary
To a winters day.
There is beauty, in a fresh
Blanket of snow .
Winters version of the suns warming change.


— press, Aug 10, 2009

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