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August on Rodin

August  on Rodin



The sun moved
when I wasn't looking
and now the leaves
are tinged with gold.




 
— Kailashana, Aug 10, 2009

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odd molly

16 years 10 months ago

This is such a lovely poem

This is such a lovely poem with few words painting such a grand picture. I also love the word tinged. I do not know why.. I just do. Love
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Anna

I noticed this when I was out by the river on Saturday... the leaves have already begun. But I am not sad because I enjoy all the seasons. Always, Cat
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

beautiful

visually stunning! Fall is my favorite season. You caputured it well.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 10 months ago

natures returned love.

Oh like me, you see the moment the visions offered to us, and seeing them are given natures returned love. A worthy one to receive such love, you are Anna Ann of Norway