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Final Coat

Just like paint drying in the wind,
my head seems to wrap around each step I take;

Knowing full well that it'll be dry,
but not sure of how many flaws will hold their own;
posessing every drip and run, as if a medal.

The rippling waters of a moment stirred
can last the equivelent of a life-time
and help blur the moments of all of one's tommorrows,
if we perpetually allow it.

Silly, how I've thought
that my life was different and more important.

However, the sun alone...dries the paint;
the wind can only adhere life to it's flaws;
and the canvas can only scream of life's disregard.

And the same wind at work,
continually finalizes it's own legacy
by drying the surface of something oh, so dear...
but letting it slip away.

We are not merely canvases,
for we are the "painters" of our tomorrows;

and it is we, That holds each day's key !
'Tis a dreadful shame we don't posess the "lock".
But, let's all let our paintings dry in the wind,

....and as we all claim ownership of the day,
know that we alone are the painters of our own existences,
and that  those that aren't, can go dry up in the sun...
....it's either that, or they might as well, quit painting !



— docmaverick, Aug 10, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 10 months ago

Doc.....I'd like...

to imagine that I can paint each day as it comes ...and that I have the power to paint "the picture" I'd like...but let me ask...."what if before the paint drys in the wind...it gets smeared...or drips in another direction....therein lies the "problems" that come to us in life...very thought provoking Doc...I like this...Thank you once more..
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 10 months ago

We do our level best....

...to paint all of our days. Things happen that we don't count on, but if I'm outta green, I'll use yellow and blue....and so on. My days are, "MINE"...and that doesn't change even if the paint smears....in fact, that makes that day even MORE endearing to me. Thank you, so much for the kind remark. Couldn't do much better, than to paint you ! sincerely, #{:>{)}8==== docmaverick.