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2 Quills
Aug 11, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Donnie

lol Donnie, my good man! There’s no need to roll around on the floor, for goodness' sake, I dropped my cookie crumbs down there! :) Glad ya liked it, it was just a little something different I’ve seen you on the stream…been meaning to come by and check out your scribbles as well. Corey
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 9 months ago

Corey...

This is really good! I had a little beat going there, while I was reading it. Raven
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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Raven

You caught that beat too huh? Those were feathers pounding on my heart as if it were a bass drum. And all the while, spirits dance! Blessed be Yours
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 9 months ago

got the munchies

Hi. I liked so much what you wrote at Raven's blog that I thought I'd come check out something of your poetry. Pretty darned good! Except now all I feel like doing is eating! Thanks a lot!
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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Marie

Marie…I can not, shall not, will not! Be held accountable for the uncontrollable impulses that may occur upon the reading of said poem. Further more, in no way, shape, or form shall I accept responsibility for costs incurred when making regular trips to the grocery store for munchies after the reading of such material. I relinquish any and all liability to the individual in which this stands. Thanks for dropping in, happy you could find something to your liking. And you're welcome, alot! :) Corey
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 9 months ago

Hah!

What a setup, Corey. And I was just about to send you my bill. Well, thanks for being straight with me, anyway. I'm off to devour an expensive fresh fig.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

Snack Attack

Curiosity at the unsual format and the quick pace made me gobble this up. I thought at one point that you were going to break into the old favorite of mine: I scream, you scream, we all scream for ice-cream. Nice work. ~ Gee
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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

~Gee

Thx ~Gee I suspect there were a few of those old ditties floating around in my head when I rambled this one off. It is a wonder what effects of even a little bit of caffeine can do to a hungry individual. Stay well, ~C
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

Caffeine.. .

Caffeine, I remember it well! Ah, for the days when I could drink whatever I wanted with no dire effects. It was a nice write and I enjoyed it. Geezer
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sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

~Giggles~

Hun..your just too darn funny..I remember all too well the night this one was born *winks* that was a fun night .. Smooches ya an skips on out.. you know who...
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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Indeed I Do

Aye, that was a goodnight ~my sweet~ Your smooches got me seeing stars.
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

wow

Very cool! I loved it,I loved it,iI loved it!
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barbsdad2003

16 years 9 months ago

Uh-oh

Looks like you had fun (too darn much of it) in the writing of this. Wondering how it'd all look in the vertical (rather than in its present close-to-the-margin horizontal). It'd take an awfully wide sheet of paper to accommodate the long line, of course. And I must say I've now had too much fun in the reading of it. Nowadays, since I'm diabetic, I can't/won't snack; instead I'll check my blood pressure ... and take a stab for the blood sugar while I'm at the BP. (I'd use the initials BS for "blood sugar," but it might be misunderstood. (Though nothing new there; I'm often misunderstood.)) Thanx, Chuck
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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Thx, Chuck!

I certainly did have a bit of a blast when I birthed this one. But, ummm…are you sure you don’t have your glasses on sideways, my good man? I rather thought that it was in a vertical format already. Or maybe, I’m mistaken? Either way, I think I caught your point, as I could only imagine what our three ring binders would end up looking like then. Knowing that it brought at least a few smiles to some faces out there is the greatest compliment that I could have hoped for, for it. Please feel free to feel that you are welcomed here. Corey
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barbsdad2003

16 years 9 months ago

Oops!

My brain twisted ... and failed to inform me of it. If you replace my vertical with horizontal (and vice versa), I think the comment's a better fit with reality. Something I think I could do a bit more work on. Altho some things are clearly from the start impossible of achievement; so perhaps I'd better not try. Maybe I ought to apply my efforts to more productive matters. When the person at the library checkout's prone to say on my approach, "May I help you," I respond (appropriately), "I think you assume, perhaps in error, that I'm helpable." Anyway ... Thanx, Chuck
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear 2 Quills

Such a pace, loved it.The agitation to rush for a snack, been there, done that, put a smile on my face. I loved reading this. Well done. Thanks Lyz XX