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Tarnished Wings part 4

                    " My people love  guest, as you are about to discover,"
                    "They will have you sleeping on the softest of clover"
                    "If you harm my people, I promise you will die."
                     "My vengeance is great, so don't even try."
                    "My queen," laughed the stranger.
                    "Let me assure,my visit it peaceful,
                    "My intentions are pure."
                     Then she looked in his eyes and said
                   "I guess we will see,but the last thing you want,
                    "Is to make an enemy of me."
                    "Your majesty!"he crooned
                    "Your spirit and beauty is fair,
                    "Crossing you?No I wouldn't dare."
                     Then he pulled her close
                     Put his lips to her ear
                     And whispered softly
                    "You have nothing to fear."
                    "Feeling his breath on her neck,
                     She felt her resolve slip away
                     She had the strangest sensation,
                     She wanted him to stay
                     She felt a yearning in her thighs
                     She did not understand
                      She fell into his trap
                      With the simple stoke of his hand
                      Yes his evil spell had been cast
                      She would play his game
                      He would tarnish her wings
                      And bring shame to her name
                      She had no idea, of the trouble to come
                      There would be no one left standing 
                       Once he was done
                       
                                                                                                   To be continued
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— greeneyes, Aug 09, 2009

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 10 months ago

Tarnished wings

My dear young lady, what you have created here is spellbinding story telling. To be very honest, it needs a great deal of polishing to achieve its potential, but you have the makings of a wonderful , classic tale of a woman betrayed. I am so impressed by the unfolding tale - this would work equally well as a short story. Well done you, what an imagination Love Ian T
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

thankyou

Your comments are very important to me. I will polish away as soon as i have more time!