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on the subject of poets and their agendas

On the Subject of Poets & Their Agendas


Go ahead... nail me to a tree...
on any Good Friday in December
let it be now
before the moon is full
and bleeds with her solitary mask,
dense of light,
I shall not kiss the ground you walk on
to win your favor or fervor
or up the ante,
the game is stacked
against us,
against you,
against me,
your professed love is sitting on a fence
and you have absolutely no defense,
pushing nine-inch nails as if you had a
hammer, as if you were a Jedi
with your own special Yoda,
you're so full of holes your story leaks,
you're no more a poet than I am,
you see, I admit to selling my soul
love and ecstasy have
no rules and regulations
trials and tribulations
computations and compilations
no laws and decrees
no should's or how to's
no dharma or karma
no dogma
no continuum
evolution or devolution,
this dissolution of us and them
is in the spaces between you and I
where the sun meets the shadow long
and high, so high we'll never fall
in love.





 
— Kailashana, Aug 09, 2009

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bungalogic

16 years 10 months ago

I love this

You know I have been here on Neopoet for about a month, I have gotten nothing but insults and jabs and people saying my style is all limited and everything.... I am so tired of defending myself at times. And its just two people, good grief how silly. But I read your poem, its so like How I feel. Free your mind, I feel it, love this poem its awesome!!! Thank you so much for sharing this it means a lot to me. bungalogic creator of runopians
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Yes… you say that

Yes... you say that today.... but will you still love me tomorrow? lol. ~Anna ~ destroying beliefs, one at at time.. "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Anna

WOW ... Speachless ... Love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

You, speechless? Never…

You, speechless? Never... the world doesn't work that way.... ;-) ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
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raskin

16 years 10 months ago

clever

Clever, well versed rant. Made me smile. raskin
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Keep on smiling, I’ll get

Keep on smiling, I'll get you pissed off soon enough... Ha! (or maybe not ;-) "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
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raskin

16 years 10 months ago

Nah

I'm never pissed off for long. I think it is an interesting issue you brought up how to critique but not criticize. I know there are times I need assistance because I may not see a word, phrase, grammar etc.. correctly. I try to maintain the integrity of the poem. Sometimes a phrase may not work for someone else but if I intend it to read that way I leave it. I think writing at least for me is a personal expression I truly enjoy. It actually has taken me a bit to learn to accept critique. Good to bring out discussion of an issue I think your poem brought that out. raskin
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

It’s not easy being

It's not easy being green...but it's better than being mean.. IMExperience, every experience is of value, and a true poet uses each and every one of them in a *productive* manner. It's only about creativity... personalities often get in the way. *Get out of your way*...and poetry flows no matter what. End of Sunday morning sermon. It's sunny and a steambath here today, after the coldest July & August (so far) in 150 years. ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
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poewriter58

16 years 10 months ago

Anna

What can I say your writing never lets my belief in it down Love this one also Chrys.
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bjp

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Anna,

complaint teak sleak slender tender like your tongue a sophisticate distended by libidos’ price you wrap around me apparently callus words mews of contented discontent slathering my skin with that loving spittle saved for the few those too close too far you bruise me with loves’ bluntness “run now or stay” Brian
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 10 months ago

Dash and balderdash

Oh what a flow of wonderful sounding words all along the washing line of your thoughts dear Anna. I loved it, waltzing along among your thought-patterns with your dash and balderdash never daunting you pen, the dreadful dramas of past terrors masked in rhetoric, and flashing their teeth to fit the blow of the hammer on the nails of the unmentionable. The moon bleeding with her solitary mask is genius, and the growing length of that shadow rising, rising so high that we are unable to reach the very tip of it and FALL... in love. I fund no bumps in this poetic riding of words and give you five for your audacity and verve, you've got a nerve. Dear Anna of the wanded(!) wings from Ann in the mist of morning Norway  
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Ink Dragon

16 years 10 months ago

Anna,

I admit to selling my soul... You? Never. You offer us voyeuristic glances into it, and we are enraptured, captured, begging for more. Much love, ~Nina
LD

leonard daranjo

16 years 10 months ago

You know something Anna

What appeals to me most about your writing is the bitterness that emanates from your poetry. I relate to your work very deeply. These lines before the moon is full and bleeds with her solitary mask, dense of light, I find higly appealing. Even as I write this comment, I am listening to a piece by Lester Young (I am not sure if you are into Jazz). His solitary sombre tones seem to capture the mood of your poem. Yes, poetry and music do go well together. I really love what you write and love you for writing the way you do. Leonard
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 10 months ago

Ouch...

but I already love you Anna great write here and sets us all where we are, in this thing called humanity's soup... thank you Anna! Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

“You bruise me with

"You bruise me with Love's bluntness." Brian. Never. ;-) Chrys... Never beLIEve anything I say, only what you feel. Leonard... Yes, you have put your finger on my speciality: bitter tea. Nina....we buy and sell ourselves/our souls everytime we get taken out of our innocence... Moonman....yup... the cosmic soup... and we all go down the drain sooner or later, I'd like to think there's a *happily ever after*... Love to All, All to Love, ~~~ "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Ann…it’s Anna of the

Ann...it's Anna of the *wounded* wings... we are of the same flock. Love. ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Anna

Yes, you are a poet. I am so glad that you found this poem while you were searching for something else... but I want to read the "something else" too. I'm so greedy for your words. Always, Cat
Rett

Rett

16 years 10 months ago

!

!!! 'nuff said! *S* Respectfully, Rett: "Let us then turn this government back into the channel in which the framers of the Constitution originally placed it. " Abraham Lincoln
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Diatom Shells

16 years 10 months ago

ouch..

that's a stinger I like it. I had to read this before I darted out to clean my house its been neglected since I found you fine folk. brilliant is your mind ~A -diatom shells
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Thanks, Cat but I forget

Thanks, Cat but I forget what I was looking for... Rett: !h! Diatom: You don't wanna go inside Anna's mind... you'll never know who you'll find... Love to All. ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 10 months ago

love always

in all things, Jess "The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue." Emma Goldman
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Amen.~A“If you have come

Amen. ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
Esker

Esker

16 years ago

wonderful

I like this poem passionate and straight up ~
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

Dear Anna!

May you drink champagne! wonderful Much love shirley harrison