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Harvest

Death reaps in the fields Yes, and we are the gleaners That follow behind.
— Diatom Shells, Aug 08, 2009

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Marie-I-Be

16 years 10 months ago

variety

Aha! And you can also do Japanese style! This is very good. How much can one say in three short lines? But you have given strength. (I suggest you don't need that period at the end.) On top of your delightful exuberance, I can feel (and see) that you are a thoughty young woman. A real pleasure to meet you. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

A death poem, full of life!

A death poem, full of life! Aha! Agreed with every word, Marie. ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's
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Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

Great write here! Yes, more poems each day is good!

Great write here! Yes, more poems each day is good! Cheers Anni~ "Clarity of mind means clarity of passion, too; this is why a great and clear mind loves ardently and sees distinctly what it loves". Blaise Pascal (1623 - 1662)
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Diatom Shells

16 years 10 months ago

thank you...

thank you ladies just a little tid bit I posted in a flash. -diatom shells