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bet you're glad

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bet
you're
glad

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school days, school days,
good ol' rotten rule days ...

                                       ---barbsdad
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school's boring I think
you know what I mean don't you
that's not an opinion

of mine

it's a fact proven
or not if you don't know such
as the case you have

not been paying
attention bona fide I
hated school wanted

out wanted

it to stop cease
desist enough already
oh yes uh-huh for

sure to

quit my impossible
boredom I sickened myself
and when I did

pretended it did
leave get away went to
live with my grandparents

who lived

in Tillamook County
you know where little Hebo
sits right under the

mount east of Little
Tuck so close to the sour
yellow cheese factories

so mysterious

and the grand Pacific's
grim-gray ocean and her salty
tideflats did near nothing

but romp with the farm
animals skip flat rocks across
the pasture pond's smooth

surface watch early
spring's Three Rivers' riled-up flood-
waters begin their

slow

withdrawal from gush of
lost temper to more normal
stage become clear less

muddy made it easier
to spot trout minnows first fresh
to life flash white

tummies I missed school
started to anyway you
can believe it or

not I won't blame you
either way your choice your life
some parts of it

anyhow and for sure
did not want to have to
repeat a year at

that age years seemed like
five should I opt to return
in the fall or

not

whatever I do
and did like having options
who doesn't so I

transferred to Nes-
tucca Union High on the
hill in Cloverdale

with one helluva
view across the valley claimed
my father's parents

as legal guardians
when they weren't not really signed
up for classes they

indeed

did not have Latin
available so put me
in end-of-year Spanish

which got confusing
being not much plainer than
Greek to me and the

frustrated

teacher felt sorry
for me I was so stressed out
gave me a B even

though I did not do
well cutting in like that at
last month of first year

of non-Latin so
to speak I'd been blessed with all
A's in Latin at

the other school which
made that B look awfully
pathetic then and

even now

in retrospect so
that is how I'd like to say
I ended up my

learning
seven months

of Jean Martin's
introductory
Latin at first blush

so weird and not learning
one month of Lat- --- er, Spanish
in that junior year

of high school as my
memory has its hold on it
since I'm all but out

of breath this very
instant no surprise huh I'll
stop to catch my next

burst of

wind before it gets
away from me bet you're
glad ...

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Marie-I-Be

16 years 9 months ago

Then you lose ...

... the bet. I'm not glad this is over. Incredible. Extravagantly perfect. I love the lack of punctuation. Breathy or breathless, the pace from start to finish is superb. I don't know how you were able to time everything so well, but you surely have succeeded in every way. And you know I never overgush, as I know you also do not indulge in such. What a nicely compact picture of your school years. Nuff said. I think you get the gist of my reactions. I could go on and on and on ...
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barbsdad2003

16 years 9 months ago

'Twas ...

... indeed a fun write. A venture into new territory, this is the only time I've written a (virtually) punctuationless piece. A truth told in one breath, so to speak. Though I challenge anyone to read it aloud from beginning to end without breathing. Of course in a rush while at it. Appreciate your comment. Appreciate your judgment. Appreciate your writings. Wishing for more. Of course. Thanx, Chuck
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 9 months ago

appreciated

I appreciate your appreciation to an appreciable degree! Yay, us!
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 9 months ago

on not breathing

One of those synchronized swimmers who can perform underwater tricks for minutes at a time could probably get through this in one breath! That would make the brain buzzy, though.
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Quillsvein1

16 years 9 months ago

ha!

a smoothly flowing, somehow charming piece about our (non) educational system. what real sentient human being could not feel the same way? good job. GB
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barbsdad2003

16 years 9 months ago

I like your ...

... (non)educational (so true!) system. And the sentient. And of course your strong approval. Thanx much, Chuck
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 9 months ago

So...

you speak Spanish... lol, loved the tone of this Chuck, the truths about "B"'s we never see. I think you love nature as much if not more than I do, and you have your whole life as I have, as a boy I spent the entire day in the woods, still love it and the water, we are, after all, just one among the animals of Earth. enjoyed the read my friend. Richard
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barbsdad2003

16 years 9 months ago

Well, I don't ...

... know about that. I just got the flavor of Spanish from the high school experience. Then picked up nearly a semester of it at Fresno State College. And now that I annually visit for about two weeks a place that's most comfortable with Spanish, I'm able to hear more of it. And sometimes speak bits and pieces of it. Not at all well. But I do love the sound of it. And its simplicity in terms of spellings matching up so well with pronunciation (so unlike a seeming majority of English). As to nature, it's where I live. And what I live for. I never miss the city. I always miss the country. Thanx for the read, the comment, and your presence here. Yours, Chuck
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barbsdad2003

16 years 9 months ago

A side note ...

... to Marie above, if I may: I like very much your profile pic. In fact, if I were younger, I'd probably ... Oh, never mind. Scratch that. Forget 'twas ever said. Sorry. Chuck
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 9 months ago

{ * - * }

♥ ♥
kaligantsaros

kaligantsaros

16 years 8 months ago

I love self important chucks

Have you not learnt that the world has moved on from homophobic name calling? These two posts between us have revealed so much of your personality and moral conduct that I feel just plain sorry for you. In what may have been a moment of well meant self seeking intervention, you have revealed yourself for what you really are. You must be proud to have spent so much time here and still be behaving like an unreconstructed social fascist. Oh and if your thinking of using cheap backroom psychology don't bother it's cheap and speculative.
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 8 months ago

jackasseries

Psssssst, Chuck! It's called projection. Don't let him get to you. If it looks like a jackass, acts like a jackass, and stinks like a jackass, it's a jackass. I think it's time we make a formal complaint of this stalker creep to the AEC. There's only so much one can do to defend against the ugliest of jealousies. We've tried ignoring, we've tried difficult politeness, we've tried outpoeming and outsniding, and he keeps coming back for more, both barrels loaded. He's just a Jerk with a capital J. Low self-esteem and insecurity are no excuse for this guy's incessant puking. If this were a contest, of course you and I would win easily, but I for one am tired of the time-consuming chore of sweeping up after this obsessive fool's defecating messes. So I hope this will serve as my formal complaint for now. I'll wait for you to come back online if you want to do it together officially.
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barbsdad2003

16 years 8 months ago

I agree

I do agree it's time, Marie. This SOB's taunting, harassing, threatening, and baiting will stop or be stopped. He's an attention-suck and an energy-suck (and everything else you said), desperate for attention (mostly yours). I'd like to know how in hell he is carrying around the official title of Neopoet Supporter. Nothing about him fits that description. If he approaches you or me another single time, I will draft a formal letter of complaint urging his removal from this site. Chuck
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 8 months ago

the end

Thank you for everything, Chuck. I will breathe much easier when I'm convinced there has been a desistance of the Kaligantsaros brand of thuggish lying, badgering, grandstanding, and self-puffery. And that's the end. I want to get back to writing and encouraging.
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

About the Jackass

Chuck, I agree with Marie-I-be, he is a total Jackass! But please don't deprive us of you just because of this @sshole! He is a dime a dozen and you are priceless. Always, Cat
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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

I bet I'm not

Hmmm…I don’t know, Chuck! I’d say that you’re about 0/4 in the betting category. I rather enjoyed this casual, yet quick paced stroll down memory lane. It takes me back to the days when I was in school and some of the fond as well as the not so fond memories of having to move around and switch to new schools a few times when I was younger. I too, remember some of the awkward feelings that were accompanied by the challenges it created. All in all I thought it was a nice read. Thanks, Corey
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barbsdad2003

16 years 9 months ago

Thanx, Corey

Your visit here much appreciated. And incidentally, I attended three different high schools before graduating. As to grade school grades one through eight (there was no preschool/kindergarten), I attended a dizzying---hold on a moment while I count---five (in four states). Or at least it seemed dizzying. Yours, Chuck
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2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

You're welcome, Chuck

Oh, wait a minute, let me think here….without counting pre-school, I think I went to three different grade schools, one middle school, and two high schools. Grades 1-8 were all attended when my family and I lived in California. And then the summer before high school started, my family moved to Michigan. Moving across states and starting a new school was definitely the biggest challenge of those years. Everything before that was merely moving from one area to another within the same region of a single state. It certainly had an impact on me as my grades tended to sometimes suffer the consequences of it. The hardest part (I think) was making new friends at each new place I went to, and then ending up having to leave those friends behind. However, I also like to think that those were great life experiences for me as I feel that they helped to give me a better understanding in learning how to be able to appreciate people for their differences at an early age. Gosh…now I think I’m the one who’s getting dizzy! Hey, I'm just glad that I graduated lol. Regards
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Ink Dragon

16 years 8 months ago

Chuck, Marie and Theo:

as you can see, your argument is gone for now. When we have decided on this matter, you will all receive official communication from the AEC. Please do refrain from stirring it up again in the meantime. Thank you. Yours, ~Nina
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barbsdad2003

16 years 8 months ago

Gotcha, Nine.

Thanx for the alert. I've just now responded to Richard via PM regarding this. He has my OK to share it with other members of AEC. Thanx again, Chuck
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 8 months ago

Ouch, Chuck

What a place for a typo, Chuck. ;-) As my thank-you to you has been deleted, I've come to thank you again, and for everything. I tend to stick up for those who stick up for me (also for the underdog, but that’s not you in this case), and I'm sorry if my strong language drew you in to the dangerous tango. From my perspective, neither of us composed any inaccuracies, and that's something I define as a display of high integrity. Especially as ongoing events have now unfolded, I have a feeling this place has become spoiled for you in its present atmosphere, and the tragedy (read travesty) lies in the fact that you have been loyal to Neopoet since nearly its inception. You must be one of the kindest, most supportive people here---and not only to me. Judging from your long line of amazing poetry and your encouraging, helpful comments to others, I can truly say you also have been one of the most valuable contributors at this site. That you are now being mistreated and underappreciated by your peers is a real downer for me, and I regret whatever role my presence has played. The AEC, which in my opinion has failed miserably in the handling of this "matter," at the very least owes you an apology, and I hope they eventually will see fit to deliver you one, and in a public way. I don't know what the immediate future holds, but I wanted to express my thoughts to you here in case you will be looking in. As ever, Marie ♥
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orgami

16 years 8 months ago

apostrophees and Commars

great little ramble I stayed in school because staying home although in the country a fine small home was deadly boring as a teen No income no job no money and I brought my whiskey and had a shot in the morning and afternoon somehow I graduated and even made freinds with some fellows and some interestingly attractive young ladies was an art nerd but didnt go too well academically Latin is the root of language for the most glad to have took typing and law and the shop classes were outrageously funny with its characters sincere and out there I stayed in same area until escaping years later to hit road and live on streets meeting outrageously interesting characters Myself included I enjoy your take on life Chuck and poetry very much
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 8 months ago

Hi Chuck

I see you're still up to your good work. Well, I guess I always loved school for one reason or another, beautiful Italian boys in 9th grade, to actually learn something at age 38. 'that age years seemed like five. . .' Too bad years seem like months now. 'of non-Latin so to speak I’d been blessed with all A’s in Latin at' I was blessed to take Latin too. Isn't it too bad there are few (if any) schools (in US) that offer Latin? 'surface watch early spring’s Three Rivers’ riled-up flood- waters begin their' I lived very near Three Rivers, MI. Where is this Three Rivers? Very entertaining. Thank you. Yours, Deelilah
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Marie-I-Be

16 years 8 months ago

To the powers that be ...

Thank you for replacing what had heretofore been removed from this page. I think the series of comments helps to explain much of what has taken place ... if only for posterity.