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Aug 08, 2009
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Tarnished Wings Part Three
"My Lady ''' he purred, as he held out his hand
"Is this any way to welcome me to your land?"
He gently helped the queen to her feet
"My Lady" he whispered "this day is so sweet"
"Who are you?" she whispered, he voice down low
" You do not belong here, I want you to go!"
"Your majesty" he whinned
In a falsely hurt voice,
" I will do as you say, if that is your choice."
" But as the queen that you are, you know that it is wrong,
"To not take me in for one night,for my journey has been long."
"Just let me rest my ery head, for only one moon or two,
Then I will take leave of this place, as you wish me to do."
She stared deep in his eyes
"I do not trust this man."
"But turn him away?I do not know if i can."
"Very well" she sighed, her giving side with the win,
Not realizing the disaster,that was about to begin
to be continued
— greeneyes, Aug 08, 2009
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