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Aug 08, 2009
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Finding You
In the silence that surrounds me in the dead of the night
The thought of you comes to my mind
And when the rain drops pierce through my skin yet again
It’s you that I crave; it’s you that I find
I try to make this pen bleed on the paper
And I try to form something lucid with my words
It’s hard for me to find the words that explicate you
It’s harder to get you out of my mind
I don’t need to hold you to know how it feels
When you’re out of sight
I only wish that I was more than I am
Wish I could do more than I can
I wish there was more to this than there can ever be
I wish there was more in this for me to see
I crave for you to see through me, the way I think I do
And I speak to you like you're a part of me
Because all I see in this broken mirror is you..
The thought of you comes to my mind
And when the rain drops pierce through my skin yet again
It’s you that I crave; it’s you that I find
I try to make this pen bleed on the paper
And I try to form something lucid with my words
It’s hard for me to find the words that explicate you
It’s harder to get you out of my mind
I don’t need to hold you to know how it feels
When you’re out of sight
I only wish that I was more than I am
Wish I could do more than I can
I wish there was more to this than there can ever be
I wish there was more in this for me to see
I crave for you to see through me, the way I think I do
And I speak to you like you're a part of me
Because all I see in this broken mirror is you..
— dhruv, Aug 08, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 10 months ago
dhruv, I feel what you are feeling
dhruv
16 years 10 months ago
this is much more personal
raskin
16 years 10 months ago
Hi