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Aug 08, 2009
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illumination nation
City nights illumination
artificial light for the nocturnal nation
this our own creation.
Every race and creed you will find
either gender or two of a kind
pedestrian streets
A face in the crowd
blends with the many.
Focus on fashion , social interaction
an every day distraction
A postal address
The property ladder a social scale
traffic at rush hour at the pace of a snail .
artificial light for the nocturnal nation
this our own creation.
Every race and creed you will find
either gender or two of a kind
pedestrian streets
A face in the crowd
blends with the many.
Focus on fashion , social interaction
an every day distraction
A postal address
The property ladder a social scale
traffic at rush hour at the pace of a snail .
— ziggy, Aug 08, 2009
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Candlewitch
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