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Thought You Should Know

 I was disillusioned, empty inside

Beaten down and broken

A mere shadow was all that resided of me

By angry hands and cruel words spoken

Until You…..found me within the night


Took me as your own


Made me Your Queen ..

Your eyes were flickered with flames

As you summoned me from my cocoon
You saved me from my self

And my certain impending doom

The touch of Your calloused hands

The sound of Your velvety voice

Heaven or Hell?


You’ve taken away my choice

You shown me my place

On my knees at Your feet willingly


You’ve chosen as my seat

You give me rules that I follow

And tasks for me to complete

You’ve earned my trust
In your words and in deeds

I shall follow you with pride

Wherever You shall lead


You collar me with your love

You’ve taken all that is me
You pushed me past all my limits

By doing so ~You~ set my soul free

You make me feel worthy

 

You make me feel royal

I’ve given to You my heart

I’m so glad that You saved me

From the shadows and the dark of my yesterdays

I would serve You forever

If you wish it shall be so


~Master~


You are my everything,


I thought You should know

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16 years 9 months ago

Hmmm...Master, huh?

Hmmm…Master, huh? I could have some fun with that! wink I like to believe that we saved each other ~My Sweet~ Just listen here My Darling, Dear For I wish this to not be missed How when I came to be with you It was by the light that I’d been kissed You know, I know that you know, I know. Love, Moi
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

wow

i feel a kindred spirit with you, you have no clue how much this poem means to me.
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sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

~Giggles~

Sweetest love is what you have given me My Darlin, never did I know what love truly was until you..and you are the ~Master~ of my life you lead and care for me and have given the feeling of safety and peace that I have never known before.. Glad you enjoyed this for tis was for you.. Bows graciously before her King...~kisses~
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sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

Green Eyes

A kindred spirit indeed..so glad you enjoyed it..to me that is the greatest compliment that anyone can give me is to feel a connect and relation to my creation..I don't always try to be grammatically correct as much as I do ~real~ Please stop in anytime you wish..the door is always open.. Jen
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

~Sweet~

WoW ... nothing like love to write a poem in ;) much love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

Seren

I agree..nothing like to inspire one's emotions.. So glad I could make ya say WoW!!
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Sweetspirit

So aptly named. Now this is love. How beautiful, so vivid.I can see u looking into each others eyes and declaring without a blink. I loved This Love story. Love Lyz XX
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mantiscepter

16 years 8 months ago

Giving All

Hey Sweetspirit. how are you? I guess this would be complete and utter, submission to a higher power,acceptance with no accolades, other, than the touch of each. I loved this , it was exceptional. Mantiscepter