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Tanished Wings Part Two (The Story Begins)

                                      
                             Yes that one fateful day
                             She had gone to the vine
                             To gather the grapes
                             For the evening meal's wine
                             Of the daily task,this was the sort,
                             She could have given,to one of her court.
                             But she chose to do it,
                             For she found it fun
                             So she flew out that morning
                             In the bright morning sun
                             Filling the basket, as far as it would go
                             She sang songs of fairies
                             Of long long ago
                             Once she was done,
                             She took a last look around
                             That is when she heared
                             The a very strange sound             
                              It was a singing fairy
                              But not one she knew
                              She frowned,confused
                              Not sure what to do
                              For the last five hundred years,
                              Since she had been queen
                              There was not one single fairy,
                              Whose birth she hadn't seen
                              So who was this fairy?
                              And why was he there
                              Holding herself close as she shivered,
                              Unpleasant chill in the air
                              Then thats when she saw him
                               Hiding deep in the trees
                               One look n his eyes,
                                She fell to her knees
                                He slowly approached her
                                With a smile that did not reach his eyes
                                The queen put her hands to her mouth
                                To stifle her cries 
                          
 
                                                    
                                                                                            To be continued soon  

                                                                                                       
                   

 
                                 


     
— greeneyes, Aug 07, 2009

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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odiumscurse

16 years 10 months ago

More!

Done to soon! but good poetry the way it flows. PHENOM:T.S
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 10 months ago

Your enchantment continues!

Green Eyes... I got chills when I came to the part where she sees the new fairy... This is getting Sooooo good... And I thought it was great already! If you will excuse me... I'm going to see what happens next... With my love, Raven
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

thankyou

this still needs alot of work i hope to make it better, but ilove hearing from you and look for your comments.