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TO MY DEAR SWEET KITTEN

To  My Dear Sweet  Kitten!

I t was left alone in my home by
It’s mother in a corner of a wall
It mews and moves with hunger and
had a cup of milk as it’s food
Very slow moves and low mew
Made us to love as our child
Days have gone  it grows with love
Sleeps in our bed as friendly dear
It calls for food, mews for sleep and
Talks with us as our  beloved soul
We forget TV  to hear music and
enjoyed the song of our kitten
Mew Mew are our new notes  and
It’s jumps and plays are our new shows
We were six before it’s arrival but
now we are seven with my dear
— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 07, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 10 months ago

Sweet Kitten...

You have again surprised me Sakkkkk, I loved it! Just one thing, I think if you leave off: To My Dear, it wouldn't sound like you are talking to the kitten, instead of about it. The theme is consistant, and the logic flows all the way through, Nice job! Your friend in poetry, Gee