Lady of Shalott

Lady of Shalott

floating
downstream
the Lady of Shalott

dying to a painter's brushstroke
waits for Godot
three candles and a crucifix

in another time of time
Merlin dreams
a ponderous thing

Flaming June
asleep Leighton's sofa,
drains ambrosia's jeweled-chalice

(rising)

Evening Mood of Bouguereau
black silk, rose-petal soft
swan-neck, alabaster skin

touching earth

— Kailashana, Aug 06, 2009

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Nordic cloud

16 years 10 months ago

Anna, Lady of poetry's magic wands

Anna, Lady of poetry's magic wands You have painted a vision of half-forgotten myths and legends, Rosetti-style with all the trimmings of the 1800's embellishing your short sweet perception, Bougereau's skin-tones are mixed with the rich brocades of scenes past, knights and ladies flit through our minds eye and we are conned into the unearthly dream of your creation. I wasn't quite with the "Leighton's sofa", is that an American addition that I don't understand? I row towards you Anna in a boat of fish-skin-like beauty wrapped in the dreams I had when I was a child, and my mother told us the tales of the Knights of the Round Table, where I was born in Somerset, near Glastonbury, England; and I thank you for making the cobwebs of my mind wander again in those strange evocative places.

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Some of my favourite

Some of my favourite images... Leighton's sofa, is a bit of a stretch, in viewing his http://cdn.overstock.com/images/products/L10220599.jpg I imagined his model, asleep on his sofa/divan... As a child I loved fairytales, read everything in the library...even the adult books.. As an incurable romantic, how could I not fall in love with the Arthurian tales? The essence of good. Did you see King Arthur with Clive Owen? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/King_Arthur_(film) I loved it. And it seems I am inexorably linked with the UK... ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's

Marie-I-Be

16 years 10 months ago

Merlin

This is delectable, Anna. Beautiful and properly moody ... Maybe you would like "three candles and a crucifix" for a lift in the little beat in that line and for easier pronunciation? Just a tiny suggestion but certainly not necessary. Have you been watching the Merlin show on Sunday nights? I've missed a couple episodes in the past few weeks, but I've seen enough to know it's surprisingly impressive both in its storyline of Merlin as a young man and in its spectacular scenery and photography.

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Ha, I had been toying with

Ha, I had been toying with this poem for a couple of days, *and a crucifix* was in the original... must have slipped past me. Thanks for reading... and yes, i caught a couple of episodes... i do so love bravery, goodness, mystery, rising to the occasion (Lady of the Lake-like). Thanks for your vote (of confidence?) I loved to read as a young child..when imagination is honed..I now love movies for the extra dimension... with the advent of computer imaging it's f***ing incredible. Hugs, ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Anna

I dont have the words to express how much I love this I am merlin fan have read many merlin books and you seduced me with him and the Lady of Shallot you devious woman LOL (hug)... I loved this on so many levels ... this is poetry ... Love and hugs Jayne I fucking love this Anna!!! We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Hi Love,I love

Hi Love, I love seductions...from this http://www.novica.com/commonDSP/dsp_popup_largepic.cfm?pic=http://pics.novica.com/pictures/4/p142960_2.jpg to this http://www.1st-art-gallery.com/Jan-Styka/Seduction.html I don't know why i wrote f***ing either. lol. i'm no stranger to the word, although my activities of late...are all in my mind... ;-) Got to write some more Bukowski poems! ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

One simple word...

enchanting Always, Cat

bjp

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Anna,

baptize with your font my urgencies dab your water on my brow name me merged into thirst as the snakes dance upon tongues Hosanna these silent raptures halleluiah halleluiah halleluiah

Kailashana

16 years 9 months ago