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Poem for a Poet

Who do we write for, you and I,
 Do we know? just who and why?
“A poem for poets,” worth a try?
A challenge ; to leave wet each eye.
How best to do it – will it fly?
Or crash and burn from “ friendly fire.”
 
A poem of war! With growling tanks,
Or mighty warships with steel flanks
Or bombers circling, dropping death
As wounded soldier draws last breath.
The refugees clog roads from city
Homes all in flames, invoking pity.
 
But wars and death and refugees
Are now so common, no more please!
Once war’s depictions made bad dreams;
We turn away from victims' screams.
We cry no more for war’s death toll,
We’ve hardened hearts and armoured souls. ..

There is a meadow, sweet with flowers,
Where Tabatha, the Queen of Mieowers
 Had four cute kittens, but three died
Left blue-eyed Sammy, by her side.
The pair were happy, every way,
They hunted mice, had  time to play
 
Until one day an awful crunch
From eagle talon ; kitten lunch!
Now cat sits outside in the rain
I guess she'll never purr again
So, what did YOU make of all that
Upset at war, or just a cat?
— Tam the Chanter, Aug 06, 2009

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 10 months ago

Insight...

This poem is very beautiful, Ian... You touch feelings I have been contemplating upon. That's all I wish to say. That...and Thank you. Gentle Regards, Raven "Few men have the natural strength to honour a friend's success without envy.... I well know that mirror of friendship, shadow of a shade." - Agamemnon, 832 Aeschylus.
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 10 months ago

outasight

Thanks for the compliments, raven,I'm glad you enjoyed it. I tried to call this number you gave me but agamemnon wasn't in. I got this guy oedipus, but he was a really complex character. Love Ian
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 10 months ago

Ian...

Deep peace of the running waves to you. Deep peace of the flowing air to you. Deep peace of the quiet earth to you. Deep peace of the shining stars to you. Deep peace of the shades of night to you. Moon and stars always giving light to you. -Traditional Gaelic blessing with my love, Raven.
KS

Kenneth Sharp

16 years 10 months ago

A witty ‘ditty’. I like

A witty 'ditty'. I like the flow of it and the strong punchline at the end. It seems the piece teetered between the serious and a dark playfulness. Good job with this. My favorite lines: "We cry no more for war’s death toll, We’ve hardened hearts and armoured souls. .." "Armored souls"...fantastic symbolism there.
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 10 months ago

Hi Ken, Glad you

Hi Ken, Glad you liked it. I was trying to prove a point regarding the chasm between real,daily misery for humanity and sentimentality. My own small triumph was rhyming "flowers" and "mieowers"! Regards Ian T
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Do animals suffer? I think

Do animals suffer? I think they feel all types of human-like emotions, based on my interactions with them in all my years. Most will say we give animals human-like tendencies. I think animals are human-like the more they interact with us. But do animals suffer like we do? Suffering, after all, is the desire/need to have reality be other than it is... perhaps in the end, dear Ian, in our turning our backs from the ravages of war again and again, is at its heart, the unbearable suffering that is too much to bear. And somehow, it puts us below *animals*. ~A "You can avoid reality, but you cannot avoid the consequences of avoiding reality." Ayn Rand
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

tears to my eyes

you are so brilliant!I look to you as my idol. I would greatly be in your debt if you took a look at my tarnished wings poem that is going to be in many parts. written four so far, your opions would me the world to me and i would listen to your ideas on how to improve it. like i said i have deep respect for you and love your poetry with all my heart. With greatest love, Green eyes p.s. This poem brings tears to my eyes
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 10 months ago

That Poor Sammy. It least he had a time to run.

We poets if we ever got togther, what damage could we do! It is friendly fire that stops the callings of fate. Lovely write Tam, Lovely write "War" what is it good for? Absalutely Nothing! Say it Again! "War" some song I use to listen too Donnie/Sinbad
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 10 months ago

poets

I suppose I may have gilded the lily somewhat with a rather contrived juxta-positioning of the two halves, although it does have integrity. Thanks for taking the time to comment, people, I really appreciate it. Kindest Regards Ian T