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Beautifully Broken
Catching with the wind
faint, but breathing now
A presence begins emerging
A familiar formula coalesces
The things that are beautifully broken
draw me closer to you
fleeting
ephemeral
fugitive
Your fear of the maddening sameness of days
Sadness for old shoes on a windowsill
waiting to be rescued from the rain
The scar above your eye that you detest
because it always makes you feel like December
when it speaks to you in the mirror
These resplendently broken things
and soundless shimmers glimpsed
witness the briefest of sparks
Resistance joyously stands down
sponsoring a telling helplessness
for this tenant of your heart
The possibility of abstinence
Stands mute on the killing floor
of love’s libertine capriciousness
Illuminated at the apogee of intimacy
a barrage of desire sounds its’ report
hastening the surrender of solitude
Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 10 months ago
Totally impressive
Michael Anthony
16 years 10 months ago
Hey Jess
Michael Anthony
16 years 10 months ago
Hey Jess
Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
Hey Mike!