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Aug 04, 2009
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Tarnished Wings part one (introduction)
Most beautiful fairy the forest had seen
Spirit of a child,heart of a queen
Gentle as a kitten, but fierce as a bear
Ready to pounce,if you threatend her lair
Her laugh was like a flowing river
A magical sound,
No sweeter soul, had ever been found
She was giving and loving,
The whole forest knew,
Of all of the fairies
Her heart was most true
What was hers was yours
If she didnt have she would seek
She was foe to all bullies
Protector of the weak
Oh and beauty oh her beauty
No other could compare
From her bright violet eyes
To her dark raven hair
That spiraled down her back
Like black pearls from the sea
Flowing in the wind, wild and free
Her wings were the colors of the rainbow
Every hue sparkled bright
As the day turned to darkness
They lit up the night
Her world was near perfect,
In every imaginable way
It was a life untouched by tragedy
Till that one fateful day
to be continued very soon!
Spirit of a child,heart of a queen
Gentle as a kitten, but fierce as a bear
Ready to pounce,if you threatend her lair
Her laugh was like a flowing river
A magical sound,
No sweeter soul, had ever been found
She was giving and loving,
The whole forest knew,
Of all of the fairies
Her heart was most true
What was hers was yours
If she didnt have she would seek
She was foe to all bullies
Protector of the weak
Oh and beauty oh her beauty
No other could compare
From her bright violet eyes
To her dark raven hair
That spiraled down her back
Like black pearls from the sea
Flowing in the wind, wild and free
Her wings were the colors of the rainbow
Every hue sparkled bright
As the day turned to darkness
They lit up the night
Her world was near perfect,
In every imaginable way
It was a life untouched by tragedy
Till that one fateful day
to be continued very soon!
— greeneyes, Aug 04, 2009
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Ravenshakti
16 years 10 months ago
Captivatingly beautiful!!
greeneyes
16 years 10 months ago
wow
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Heya Green eyes … I really
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
green eyes
Ravenshakti
16 years 10 months ago
Here I am again...
odiumscurse
16 years 10 months ago
Ride The Lightning!