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A E I O

Your waking mind,
or even waking up
with you
once again--

Well, that's fine too.

A sonic disarray,
a plastique army,
guns twisting into
albino snakes,
a neon canker sore.

I reach to find the floodlit 
cavity yesterday
and three years
ago in Manhattan,
where a strange crooked
dentist told me about
picking a lottery ticket
from a dead man.

And you!
Walking on the outskirts of
Charleville, finding money
in the dead soldier's 
breast pocket

"A young soldier, open-mouthed, bare-headed..."

Convinced I would find you or
your ilk (to a nonexis tent),
we travelled in the blue
light of opium, the raining
drowse of city parks, 
for a time
your promise was
true:

Prometheus stealing fire and 
with subsidized returns

"I will tear the veils from every mystery:
mysteries of
religion or of
nature,
death,
birth,
the future,
the past,
cosmogony,
and nothingness.
 
I am a master of phantasmagoria..."

Albigensian!
Christ turned inside
out, your Illuminations
Hallucinations, and mine
too, as I explained
with my green Dollar Store
cane to a few unfriendly men
in an unfriendly alley.

Though I still hear the
whispers of lotus vinyl,
and notes dancing into
glowing vowels,

your Notes From The Damned
are simply that--you returned,
of course, in Africa to scowl
once more: but what
could you have been?

I wonder this
as a mirror splits
and a record melts
as I put your eyes away.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

GB

I am speachless this is brilliant one of my favourite lines were these but seriously loved them all Prometheus stealing fire and with subsidized returns “I will tear the veils from every mystery: mysteries of religion or of nature, death, birth, the future, the past, cosmogony, and nothingness. I am a master of phantasmagoria…” That just peeled through me those words are beautiful and mysterious and , I think I have gushed enough lol much love and hugz Jayne x x P.S a.e.i.o ... U ?lol "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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Quillsvein1

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you

Jayne! Those quotes you were so enamored of, and rightly so, are from Rimbaud's "A Season In Hell". A E I O (and the missing you) are the vowels he so miraculously made people think about ("An average poet would go mad just thinking about the letter A!," he once declaimed!" GB
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barbsdad2003

16 years 8 months ago

Truly worthy ...

... of a five-vote, this one. I'm too impressed: It's so hard to high-five you from this distance, but I'm (Quixote-like) trying. If I can nit a tiny tweak, do you mean nonexis tent ... or ought it be nonexistent? Wondering at your abilities/talents so fine displayed, so willing shared. And thanx, Chuck
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Quillsvein1

16 years 8 months ago

Thank you, Chuck

I put a bit of language poetry into it, "nonexis tent" sort of doubling up--Rimbaud's imaginative kingdom, which he viciously defended from all who attempted to alter or completely make it "understood". Dietrich Bonhoeffer once said: "It is a mean spirited man who is able to read Don Quixote and remain unmoved." I agree!