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Aug 04, 2009
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The Invisible Storm
Smiles in the eyes
and so it begins
splendored dawn of the hour,
basic rudiments
pre-dawn sins
before everything turns sour.
Misery loves company
the comfort tray
the manipulator stalks his ground,
an invisible catalyst
makes it's way
and appears with a thunderous sound.
Aftermath
ultra-shocking emotional pain
crying hearts begin to swell,
unjustified chaotic thunder
ruins a light rain
and you can't unring a bell.
Damage control
and it's far too late
the drama balloon sets sail,
a disastrous wake
and that hidden trait
will destroy love, without fail.
and so it begins
splendored dawn of the hour,
basic rudiments
pre-dawn sins
before everything turns sour.
Misery loves company
the comfort tray
the manipulator stalks his ground,
an invisible catalyst
makes it's way
and appears with a thunderous sound.
Aftermath
ultra-shocking emotional pain
crying hearts begin to swell,
unjustified chaotic thunder
ruins a light rain
and you can't unring a bell.
Damage control
and it's far too late
the drama balloon sets sail,
a disastrous wake
and that hidden trait
will destroy love, without fail.
— docmaverick, Aug 04, 2009
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Seren
16 years 10 months ago
My god Doc
docmaverick
16 years 10 months ago
Hi Jayne....