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Notion


In the midst of concrete jungle

Where dreams live, life tangles

I hunt for a spot with my finesse

Where I can see life’s axenic face.

 

Where there is calmness of heartstrings

Melodies of birds – joy they bring

A feeling free from poisonous brace

How lovely would be my loneliness!

 

Yet life exhibits its cruel act

A Fallen race’ dismal facts

A belief of mine lacks the space

No place for Eden on earth’s base.

 

 


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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

Hello

Very true, melancholic, yet with a hint of hopefulness. I enjoyed this read, especially this line: Where I can see life’s axenic face. Good word, axenic! Always, Cat
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 9 months ago

Notion

Sourav I know this path you walk my friend only too well maybe we could take a detour and find a glimpse of hope? electric