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Blueberry Delight in Flight

Electric the night
that helped form you
misted beautious
flames of blue

Swirling in darkness
wings did appear
a glow of magic
drawing to near

Shine on her face
glistens in light
mane down her back
a blueberry delight

Rippling tendrils
her soft peignoirs
gliding to places
near and afar

Eyes dropping pearls
messaged in love
gentle the wetness
that rains from above

Pure the thoughts
that flow from lips
feathered floats
from angels kissed

Alighting to heaven
she watches on high
an angel of mercy
in my evening sky

— Seren, Aug 03, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

16 years 10 months ago

Jayne

This is beautiful and seductive all at the same time, as it begs for mercy from a place deep inside. Again your reaching at the stars, and if this doesn't go there I'll truly be surprised. Thanks, Eddie
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Eddie ...

Thank you so much :D what a lovely thing to say , I wrote this for Maggie(electricblue) shes become a good friend to me as has Cat(candlewitch) they are my constant friends and support and this and the one I did for Cat are my miniscule way of thanking them for everything they have done ... hugs and love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 10 months ago

Angels of mercy....

...are ALWAYS good to have around, and in your "arsenal"!Lol ! You hit the proverbial nail on the head with this one, Jayne. Truly, a good read. "Write On"! sincerely, #{:>{)}8==== docmaverick.
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Thanks Doc ...

They are good to have around I am lucky to have a couple of angels that watch over me I am truely blessed thanks for the read and the stars and I am happy you enjoyed it take care love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 10 months ago

blueberry delight in flight

Jayne Let my blue flames surround you in warmth With magic electric blue wings take you on my back blue hair tendrils down the back bone as we take flight so high as our pearl tears fall as the gentle rain from above as angel kisses let me be your angel on high just you and I Electric Blue Angel I am glad to bring happy tears to spring forth. So lay back and take a breath deep relax be serene Let me take you to the land of my electric blue dreams let me take on your pain and release you for a short while I am sorry you had a bad night I know that pain relief does not always work but try to rest. Be swept into my dreams in this blue night When we can take flight with my blue angel wings to glow in the dark with tink’s fairy dust I sprinkle on us. Where illness does not exist we will be set free like the birds and the bees we will take flight with such ease and view such wonders from afar our spirits be set free and take flight into my electric blue night. I posted Electric Blue Angel Come join me - both of us will be set free just to be Peace be with you my dear friend. I hope I can ease some of your pain. I am here day or night when ever you need me Always Maggie Electric Blue
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Maggie ...

I am so glad you liked it my friend well I hope you did LOL and I just wanted to get it right sorry I took so long but good things and all that take time LOL and I wanted this one right ... thanks for the read huni (hug) big love Jayne ... I am soooo tired its 4am I am going to ZzZzZZzZzZZZzzzzzzzz lol "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Lovely Jayne

I think you have captured Maggie's true essence here. Wow, what a terrific tribute. It is really beautiful, just like the woman herself. My favorite lines: Alighting to heaven she watches on high an angel of mercy in my evening sky They were tough to pick out from the rest because the whole poem is totally lovely! Always, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Dearest Cat

Without you and Maggie some nights I would be lost, I wake up and usually one of you are around, In my quiet when things get hard you both keep me strong and focused , you really do ... I have no other way to thank you both but write these ... I have a small surprise for you as well I am writing a companion to the angel of night its not done yet but will be ready soon ... Just a miniscule way that I can thank you for you support friendship and the many smiles you put on my face ... ((((((((((hug)))))))))) Much Love Jayne x x P.s. A blessing you both are (hug) We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Dearest Cat

Without you and Maggie some nights I would be lost, I wake up and usually one of you are around, In my quiet when things get hard you both keep me strong and focused , you really do ... I have no other way to thank you both but write these ... I have a small surprise for you as well I am writing a companion to the angel of night its not done yet but will be ready soon ... Just a miniscule way that I can thank you for you support friendship and the many smiles you put on my face ... ((((((((((hug)))))))))) Much Love Jayne x x P.s. A blessing you both are (hug) "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 10 months ago

Bluberry Delight in Flight

Cat My dear friend I just wanted to say a big thank you for your support too of our dear friend Seren. I was blown away by your comment above. Thank you my friend. I believe only those who have really been to hell and back a few times can relate to know how precious time is and not acting on things now instead of waiting for when it may never be as times runs out. all my love from one angel to another antel Electric Blue maggie xx
Q

Quillsvein1

16 years 10 months ago

A sweet tribute

to a friend with a touch of Keats' to it--"Rippling tendrils her soft peignoirs/gliding to places/near and afar" One is reminded of the airy, careless delight of the aforementioned poet, pure poetic vision untrammeled by heavy handedness or anything of the like. Quite a honor! Wonderfully done GB
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

What beautiful compliment ...

To be compared to Keats, for me is a great honour ,He was one of the first poets I ever read as teenager and I have always loved his works ... I took a long time to finish this one , I played with it till I thought I was close , and being a good friend I wanted to get it right, Gb thank you for your lovely comment it made my day ... much love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...