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Maiden

 Maiden of the ages
playing with my heart
through years of endless travel
your tasty lips are tart

a spirit of mind
across crevices so deep
urging a togetherness  
that prods my plunging leap

dark the thoughts  
of ages you hold
heroin of deception
your touch turns me cold

a mountain viewed valley
as the cliffs of a mind
are entrapped by your vision
holding tight I find

your strength is encouraged
by weakness of faith
I cry for forgiveness
your thoughts are erased




— mantiscepter, Aug 03, 2009

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mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

United response:

thank-you for keeping an eye out! Good to hear from you again jayne, glad you got in- to the poem, did kind of have a weird sort of flow, but I liked it also. any-way nice to see your smiling face and get a nice response Sorry it took so long again, I just forget how to operate this thing. or don't read all I need .to. So till the next time Mantiscepter.
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 9 months ago

wow

How did I miss this one! It is wonderful. I love this site and the poets on it,It is a real privillage to be here.
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

Maiden

Thanx again for your warming words. I also like this site, and the poets are very nice, and more than willing to help in any way. Glad your here. you are a + to this site. thanx again. Mantiscepter