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Aug 03, 2009
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Maiden
Maiden of the ages
playing with my heart
through years of endless travel
your tasty lips are tart
a spirit of mind
across crevices so deep
urging a togetherness
that prods my plunging leap
dark the thoughts
of ages you hold
heroin of deception
your touch turns me cold
a mountain viewed valley
as the cliffs of a mind
are entrapped by your vision
holding tight I find
your strength is encouraged
by weakness of faith
I cry for forgiveness
your thoughts are erased
playing with my heart
through years of endless travel
your tasty lips are tart
a spirit of mind
across crevices so deep
urging a togetherness
that prods my plunging leap
dark the thoughts
of ages you hold
heroin of deception
your touch turns me cold
a mountain viewed valley
as the cliffs of a mind
are entrapped by your vision
holding tight I find
your strength is encouraged
by weakness of faith
I cry for forgiveness
your thoughts are erased
— mantiscepter, Aug 03, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
This is like a prayer
mantiscepter
16 years 10 months ago
United response:
greeneyes
16 years 9 months ago
wow
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
Maiden