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sweetspirit

16 years 11 months ago

I Love You

Well I can't really read this an critique it..so I can't offer much help..but I love this and love you..

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16 years 11 months ago

My Sweet,Ditto!!!I love you

My Sweet, Ditto!!! I love you O’ so much That I can’t help but let it show I’ll shout it out across the land Even if it’s only you who’ll ever know You know who

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

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This is an exquisite write. I have no suggestions or criticisms. It stands uniquely on its own merit. What beautiful sentiment. As always, Cat

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16 years 11 months ago

Awww…well thank you for that, Cat. Namaste! My muse brings out the better side in me which causes me to create such things. I can’t help it, sometimes I just feel compelled in these ways. You are a gem as your words are treasured here. Corey

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Beautiful

Along with the other ladies I am speachless I have nothing to critque but there wasnt more Corey loved this write .. gorgeous .. love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

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16 years 11 months ago

Siren

Thank you Siren, I still become just as breathless when I re-read this as I did when I wrote it. I like to let this particular piece speak for itself. Sincerely, Corey

Ravenshakti

16 years 11 months ago

Shine on...

Well... All I can say, is what you've heard before... This is lovely... Keep your light, my Shadow friend. Raven

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16 years 11 months ago

Raven

your pressence here is treasured far beyond that of which words could ever say, my friend. :)

Bonitaj

16 years 11 months ago

There's a kind of hush after awe

Gracious silence! Splendid Bonita j

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16 years 11 months ago

Bonita

...your name reminds me of the town that I grew up in, in southern california, many moons ago. Quietly sits in silence as I'm gracious for your words. Corey

sweetspirit

16 years 11 months ago

~smiles~

I can't help but smile as I re-read this hun..just the thought you made this for ~Me~ makes my heart sing. I love ya more than I could ever say and cherish what we have more than anything in this life. Yours Eternally, ~Jen~

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