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tender sweat

or so it felt,
the grime changed
in hand, a
serious
of meaningless
exchanges,
the waste men 
marker  on a
Six PM bus
seat.   

and he was beside me,
trim, young, with eyes
bleached like a map
of frenzied funeral carriages,
talking about the Illuminati
and writing on money.

"This is the way you get them."
"If you write on money,
and everyone wants money,
no one can ignore what you write."


and wouldn't that be so nice;
the fetid green paper,
not unlike some odiferous
toxic dump made slim,
excrement in our pockets,
that it would communicate.

"How long have I been with you that you have learned nothing?"

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

this one is deep and I

this one is deep and I really liked it .... how great it would be to write poetry on currency and pass that same message not just round your own country but the world ... nice thought in that ... loved this one and I had to reread it a few times because I liked it so much .. love Jayne x x
Q

Quillsvein1

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you

Seren. It's a great idea, if only people would look at the currency before they spent it! lol. GB
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

LOL I do

I am usually saying goodbye LOL .. love and hugs Jayne .. "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...