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ziggy
Jul 31, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

ETERNALLY BE

 As i close my eyes to rest 
scattered thoughts are 
brought to surface, of people 
places, pictures , faces .

Opinions forming thoughts  are 
swarming , for whole are we 
conscious free . Nothing more 
or less than self born to be  
      eternally me .

— ziggy, Jul 31, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Hi Ziggy

It's me again. I enjoyed reading your little piece and it reminds me of some of the reason's I spend sleepless nights. Favorite lines: As i close my eyes to rest scattered thoughts are brought to surface, of people places, pictures , faces . Always, Cat
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ziggy

16 years 10 months ago

hhi again

enda, patrick collins. hi there thanks for your comments again , i just posted another for reading thanks for taking the time to read always ziggy,,,,,,,,,,,