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My one & only ever cyber fling (written over 2 years ago, before I found Neo, please read as the jest intended)

Ooh Jules, my extra precious Jules (who isn't mine... but still he rules)
My grail, my quest, my cyber best... I wonder how you feel undressed?
My super flirting, eloquent... beguiling tease... though innocent (?)
My fantasy of luscious eve's, with lust encrusted rainbow sleeves.
My bringer on of sigh's and swoons, that only shows, when stars and moons.
are long since spent and then some more... such dreams of squirming on the floor.
Ah well, my far flung prince of spanking (ah, but secret thirst for .....banking)
What real time earthly lover could - fulfil such vision (if they would)
A fantasy can spoil the flesh, the lovely mind filled dance enmeshed
A kiss in truth so tender still, can only in my mind fulfil
the devastating final squeeze... it seems that you alone, can please
It isn't fair in truth I know, my fantasies now overflow
And satisfied (so easily) with words on glowing screen to me.
Oh dear, Tam Linn, I think you are, a precious passing brighter star
And halo'd and bepedastalled... I've tried, but you cannot be culled
Ah well, at least we laugh and taunt, and only lightly dreamlike haunt
I'm not obsessed, well not quite yet... although, I'd love it if we met
I am enamoured I admit... our cyber world's a comfy fit
Alas, alas... but look at ME... I'm writing bloody poetry
For goodness sake, it's for a laugh.... but now I think... I've writ enarrrff!
— Cloudthings, Jul 30, 2009

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Region, Country: Australia, regional Victoria, AUS

Favorite Poets: So many... Rumi, Spike Milligan, Keats. Many of the Neopoet clan, past & present. A myriad of song writers, Dylan, Jackson Browne, Lior, & I must add the poetic influence of painters, sculptors & creators across the world... Life really, especially the sky.

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Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

Not to be taken seriously at all... This is just a glimpse of th

Not to be taken seriously at all... This is just a glimpse of the lighter side of Anni - I had a cyber fling, never ever thought I'd go there, just happened one night, we were flirting & it got away from us (beautifully), we shocked ourselves (pleasantly), since then we have become really great friends, but chose not to return to such depths, was a little too enticing (& we both wanted the real thing, which was never going to happen with the distance between us), we've never met, he lives the other end of the country! But he is now one of my best friends. Partly because we can be stupid like this together. Jules if you read this... hope it's ok (he sometimes pops in for a read!). Cheers Anni~ ` "Those who dwell among the beauties & mysteries of the earth are never alone or weary of life" ~ Rachel Carson Writer/conservationist
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 10 months ago

LOL

I loved this! Witty, heartfelt and hilarious. And never say never: here in the 21st century the world is only as large as the next plane or train ride, the cash it takes to buy it and the time it takes to finish it. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

So glad you had a chuckle, that's the way!

So glad you had a chuckle, that's the way! I met Julian back in the days before I had a real life love & an obsession with a poetry site. We had no reason not to flirt back then. Ah well, we are such good friend now, & it made a fun poem... Distance bothers some poeple more than others, but I'm happy now with my beautiful love now & my great friend I've never met, but I speak to at least a couple of times a week. Cheers Anni~ "Clarity of mind means clarity of passion, too; this is why a great and clear mind loves ardently and sees distinctly what it loves". Blaise Pascal (1623 - 1662)
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Taylor Delaware

16 years 10 months ago

I loved this!

Oh, as much as we try to deny it, we can't help but let the curiousity sting from an online friend. At least wonder or imagining "floor-squirming" LOL! Thanks for this piece, Anni!
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

Glad you enjoyed it, was meant to be fun

No problem, we had a lot of fun... we still sign our messages "lick" as a joke... I had to explain it to my very patient man early, would hate him to think he had anything to worry about... he doesn't, I love Julian like a brother I never had. He's a great friend, I can't imagine going there with anyone else though. Cheers Anni~ "Clarity of mind means clarity of passion, too; this is why a great and clear mind loves ardently and sees distinctly what it loves". Blaise Pascal (1623 - 1662)
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iverhyck

16 years 10 months ago

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Dear Annie, you made me smile. Lovely. Konstantin.
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LiquidSunshine

16 years 10 months ago

Fantastic!

i loved it, i was smiling the whole way through. brilliant anni :) Kind regards Talia
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

Hi Talia, that's great, so glad this makes you guys smile

Hi Talia, that's great, so glad this makes you guys smile, that was my hope. Cheers Anni~ "Clarity of mind means clarity of passion, too; this is why a great and clear mind loves ardently and sees distinctly what it loves". Blaise Pascal (1623 - 1662)
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 10 months ago

Ohhhhhh, Anni !

Loved it Anni, It was good! LOL! Of course, taken in the spirit in which it was meant! I liked the way you flirted even as you said no! Great write! ~Gee.
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

Just a bit of fun this write though.

Heh... Oh but we were both in there, was mutual flirtation & eventually mutual "no".. we are such great friends now, I don't think there's a thing we wouldn't tell each other... Maybe it was a good ice breaker!! (kidding) Like I said though, can't imagine ever going there again, was just in the moment, scared us both I think. Maybe 'cos we care about each other. Just a bit of fun this write though. Cheers Anni~ "Clarity of mind means clarity of passion, too; this is why a great and clear mind loves ardently and sees distinctly what it loves". Blaise Pascal (1623 - 1662)
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 10 months ago

Hi Anni

I loved this whimsical write. I am coming back tomorrow to reread it and find more witty lines like 'lust encrusted rainbow sleeves'---and check up on what you've been doing---and am looking forward to it. Right now it's 5am here and I forgot to go to sleep. Went earlier to a birthday party for my daughter and got wired. So goodnight or good morning I guess. Always, Deelilah
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

5am, you're worse than me girl - the party must have been fun

Hi Deelilah, nice to see you, must go see what you've been up to! Yeah Julian brings out the wicked & the cheek & the wit in me, he's a good egg. Now YOU, wicked woman - 5am, you're worse than me girl - the party must have been fun! Cheers Anni~ "Clarity of mind means clarity of passion, too; this is why a great and clear mind loves ardently and sees distinctly what it loves". Blaise Pascal (1623 - 1662)
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odiumscurse

16 years 10 months ago

Wow! that was good!

That was a rhyming monster,that was good! PHENOM:T.S