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Jul 30, 2009
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My one & only ever cyber fling (written over 2 years ago, before I found Neo, please read as the jest intended)
Ooh Jules, my extra precious Jules (who isn't mine... but still he rules)
My grail, my quest, my cyber best... I wonder how you feel undressed?
My super flirting, eloquent... beguiling tease... though innocent (?)
My fantasy of luscious eve's, with lust encrusted rainbow sleeves.
My bringer on of sigh's and swoons, that only shows, when stars and moons.
are long since spent and then some more... such dreams of squirming on the floor.
Ah well, my far flung prince of spanking (ah, but secret thirst for .....banking)
What real time earthly lover could - fulfil such vision (if they would)
A fantasy can spoil the flesh, the lovely mind filled dance enmeshed
A kiss in truth so tender still, can only in my mind fulfil
the devastating final squeeze... it seems that you alone, can please
It isn't fair in truth I know, my fantasies now overflow
And satisfied (so easily) with words on glowing screen to me.
Oh dear, Tam Linn, I think you are, a precious passing brighter star
And halo'd and bepedastalled... I've tried, but you cannot be culled
Ah well, at least we laugh and taunt, and only lightly dreamlike haunt
I'm not obsessed, well not quite yet... although, I'd love it if we met
I am enamoured I admit... our cyber world's a comfy fit
Alas, alas... but look at ME... I'm writing bloody poetry
For goodness sake, it's for a laugh.... but now I think... I've writ enarrrff!
My grail, my quest, my cyber best... I wonder how you feel undressed?
My super flirting, eloquent... beguiling tease... though innocent (?)
My fantasy of luscious eve's, with lust encrusted rainbow sleeves.
My bringer on of sigh's and swoons, that only shows, when stars and moons.
are long since spent and then some more... such dreams of squirming on the floor.
Ah well, my far flung prince of spanking (ah, but secret thirst for .....banking)
What real time earthly lover could - fulfil such vision (if they would)
A fantasy can spoil the flesh, the lovely mind filled dance enmeshed
A kiss in truth so tender still, can only in my mind fulfil
the devastating final squeeze... it seems that you alone, can please
It isn't fair in truth I know, my fantasies now overflow
And satisfied (so easily) with words on glowing screen to me.
Oh dear, Tam Linn, I think you are, a precious passing brighter star
And halo'd and bepedastalled... I've tried, but you cannot be culled
Ah well, at least we laugh and taunt, and only lightly dreamlike haunt
I'm not obsessed, well not quite yet... although, I'd love it if we met
I am enamoured I admit... our cyber world's a comfy fit
Alas, alas... but look at ME... I'm writing bloody poetry
For goodness sake, it's for a laugh.... but now I think... I've writ enarrrff!
— Cloudthings, Jul 30, 2009
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Cloudthings
16 years 10 months ago
Not to be taken seriously at all... This is just a glimpse of th
Race_9togo
16 years 10 months ago
LOL
Cloudthings
16 years 10 months ago
So glad you had a chuckle, that's the way!
Taylor Delaware
16 years 10 months ago
I loved this!
Cloudthings
16 years 10 months ago
Glad you enjoyed it, was meant to be fun
iverhyck
16 years 10 months ago
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Cloudthings
16 years 10 months ago
Well, smiling is always a great thing, & that was the idea.
LiquidSunshine
16 years 10 months ago
Fantastic!
Cloudthings
16 years 10 months ago
Hi Talia, that's great, so glad this makes you guys smile
Geezer
16 years 10 months ago
Ohhhhhh, Anni !
Cloudthings
16 years 10 months ago
Just a bit of fun this write though.
deelilah
16 years 10 months ago
Hi Anni
Cloudthings
16 years 10 months ago
5am, you're worse than me girl - the party must have been fun
odiumscurse
16 years 10 months ago
Wow! that was good!