Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Pretty Eyes

 You have pretty eyes, I said with a smile;
she blushed to bright colors, as I watched all the while.
Silence surrounding; The stars cast their light.
In love with this girl?,  yes" I may be,  I might.
My heart: beats in whispers,  with flowing blonde hair.
could this be the girl/? That with life I will share.
I would like to hold close; Her warmness to mine.
Never letting her go ; till these answers I find.
But to do is so hard, for our days must part.
Each living them different: Will this love come to start?.
To share with my dreams; This girl eyes of blue.
Who chases her dreams, more than most of us do.
(Lost eyes) like clouds, breezing through skies:
I hope I can reach her. as she drifts; I'll try.
To show her a future; That will bring her to me.
To fill softly her wants. These visions she see's
— mantiscepter, Jul 30, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

More from this author

Critiques

DC

Darby Cain

16 years 10 months ago

friggin great

friggin great
M

mantiscepter

16 years 10 months ago

I’m still not sure how to

I'm still not sure how to do things right. I hope you got the reply from me, I REALLY APPRECIATE all of your comments, and for lighting my stars.
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Heyyyyyyyyyyyy :D

I had wondered if you knew to reply to people but I dont like to be pushy, I am rather computer savvy so if you need any help please dont hesitate to ask I am usually floating around somewhere ... Now to reply to people just click the reply button on the comment you want to reply to ... and thats it ... So nice to hear from you :D welcome to Neopoet again a wonderful addition to our big family and I really love your poetry ... you have a fresh raw feel and I like it ... anyhoooo if you need help please ask, I dont mind anytime ... regards Jayne :)