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Jul 30, 2009
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Pretty Eyes
You have pretty eyes, I said with a smile;
she blushed to bright colors, as I watched all the while.
Silence surrounding; The stars cast their light.
In love with this girl?, yes" I may be, I might.
My heart: beats in whispers, with flowing blonde hair.
could this be the girl/? That with life I will share.
I would like to hold close; Her warmness to mine.
Never letting her go ; till these answers I find.
But to do is so hard, for our days must part.
Each living them different: Will this love come to start?.
To share with my dreams; This girl eyes of blue.
Who chases her dreams, more than most of us do.
(Lost eyes) like clouds, breezing through skies:
I hope I can reach her. as she drifts; I'll try.
To show her a future; That will bring her to me.
To fill softly her wants. These visions she see's
she blushed to bright colors, as I watched all the while.
Silence surrounding; The stars cast their light.
In love with this girl?, yes" I may be, I might.
My heart: beats in whispers, with flowing blonde hair.
could this be the girl/? That with life I will share.
I would like to hold close; Her warmness to mine.
Never letting her go ; till these answers I find.
But to do is so hard, for our days must part.
Each living them different: Will this love come to start?.
To share with my dreams; This girl eyes of blue.
Who chases her dreams, more than most of us do.
(Lost eyes) like clouds, breezing through skies:
I hope I can reach her. as she drifts; I'll try.
To show her a future; That will bring her to me.
To fill softly her wants. These visions she see's
— mantiscepter, Jul 30, 2009
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Critiques
Darby Cain
16 years 10 months ago
friggin great
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Brilliant write … letting
mantiscepter
16 years 10 months ago
I’m still not sure how to
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Heyyyyyyyyyyyy :D