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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jul 29, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Reckless

Reckless

He made a left turn
in his shiny red truck
coming from the rear
of my purple escort

Cutting me off
to beat the light
we watched in awe
this reckless sight


— Barbara Writes, Jul 29, 2009

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago

Reckless

Barbara, I was expecting to read more about this~ It seems unfinished [just my opinion.] ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 10 months ago

Janice

thanks for commenting really appreciate it. This is it. this is just a glimpse into scene at the light when my son was taking me to an appointment. It was suppose to be written like in a way that describes a picture through time to a scene of a split moment where someone could have been seriously hurt because impatience. maybe I can word it in a way where it would seem finish. I would haft to work on that. Barbara ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago

Reckless

I see it now Barbara.... A moment in time~ Well described~ _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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ngaioBeck

16 years 10 months ago

Reckless

Terse,succinct,and pertinent. Speaks to us all.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 10 months ago

Ngaio

Thanks for reading and commenting. Really appreciate ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 10 months ago

Orgami

Thanks for the comment. Was trying something new. I am glad it came out right ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara