In this together (Neopoets)

Neopoets we flow neopoets we fly neopoets we strive drawing tears from your eye See you always inspire me Nina ... Brilliant write I adoreddddd it made me smile big ones :D:D hugz of Love Jayne x x

Rub a dub dub, three poets in a tub..Too true and congrats' Nina !

As a notorious pedantic, may I comment on your work? I really liked the analogy you used, but "disattached"?(not unattached or detached) and iridescent. Please don't ask me the German equivalents. I am not trying to knock this piece, Nina, I really like it . Kindest Regards Ian T

And ofcourse this write too! Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

After I submitted my spelling "correction" I had a feeling thar you might have meant it to be disattached. I am hopefully on first name terms with you , but feel free to call me whatever you like, as long as you call me! Kindest Regards Ian

You are so right. And we all depend on each other to keep us honest and help us when we falter. Always, Cat

Well I'll take another slice of the honeycomb-delicious dressed with a little bit of the chocolately-smooth please. That's my fav! And there is always room for one more in my boat. Hey,...is there supposed to be water coming out this thinga majigger? The trio is good where it is (I think). Prost! Corey (2Quills)

the glitterati! Exceptionally brilliant idea -well executed! Tshcuss BOni

Couldn't you put YOU at the end? It is such fun swimming with you Nina. Your descriptions in verse two are so tasteable, you should write a poem about such, its sticky and wonderfully evocative- I ski across on the chocolate sea. Your friend Ann of Norway

Ahh yes, you’ve changed it up a bit. Perhaps in light of recent activities no doubt. We’ve somehow managed to go from witty all the way up to fiery now as this piece is getting hotter with the changes which I am liking just as well. It adds a bit of spice to it which never a bad thing. I also like the idea of the addition that you’re debating. Spacious enough even for us all Spacious enough for you and I Vast enough for each of us even you as well as I Just throwing a few ideas attcha. I like the ones that you were already considering too. Corey

We are dis attached but, yet we remain the same poets that we are or will become black bone coral heart blood red so glad it floats your boat it some times sinks my Battle ship or my cross I try to bare but, it still is fun to try and make a diff. Sinbad/Donnie/Sinbad an alter ego or an altered state very nice read.

Yay, how great to see you here in spotlight & well deserved as well, really enjoyed this piece Nina, a beautiful write & thought provoking (& most pertinent as well...sigh!) I only read one comment... caught by the new visage of Tam the chanter (I love that name & the image is equally enchanting...) i was also distracted by the terminology in a couple of places & mulled the term "disattached", not even sure it is a "proper" word, but I figured you would know... in the end though, I like the idea of word creation when it fits & I can totally relate to your reply on that issue, it doesn't cut the same angle with the other options, even if they are technically correct... & it's important to remember that half the English language was created by poets & their ilk... Shakespeare the main culprit, bless his fabulous (probably stinky) boots... how I adore him, he made life far more delicious for his actions thus!!! As for iridescent (I think we all missed that you have actually written irisdescent, was this intentional?... let me know if so, you have coined another new word or used one I did not know of if that's the case) I LOVE that word, & whilst I see writing here rarely reflecting such vibrancy, it is evident on occassion, & since you are describing the continuum of styles/flavours/feels it is quite perfect to pop that beauty in... Me, I tend to like the combinations, Lindt chocky (mmm smooth) with chilli is a big fave... but I digress (Hmmmm) congratulations & thanks, a pleasure to read this. Oooh now those pics are edging to the very seductive side of things, but don't change it, it's fabulous & I love the mystique of only half seen images here. A slow silent bow to you on leaving... xx Cheers Anni~ "Clarity of mind means clarity of passion, too; this is why a great and clear mind loves ardently and sees distinctly what it loves". Blaise Pascal (1623 - 1662)

and thanks for the generous piece. Personally I disagree with "disattached from the real world" as a generalisation. Some provide piercing insights into it. Although perhaps disattachment from the real world provides the perspective for insight. Cheers, Jess "The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue." Emma Goldman

Great tribute to a great group of poets. Loved how you you ended it~ _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

but I know you like to get it right Discussion, disagreement float this poets’ boat Discussion and disagreement float this poets’ boat Discussions, disagreements float this poets’ boat Discussion, disagreement floats this poets’ boat somewhere in there. Cheers, Jess "The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue." Emma Goldman

I really liked this one. It captured the essence of cyberspace and poets quite well. Somehow, I think from the rub a dub comment above, I got to thinking of the old saying..."Don't throw the baby out with the bathwater". a throwback to the days when everyone used the same tub of water to bathe in. Sometimes we tend to throw the cyberpoet out with the bathwater. *L* Good one. Respectfully, Rett: "Let us then turn this government back into the channel in which the framers of the Constitution originally placed it. " Abraham Lincoln

That was Great Nina, I know I missed the party, but that was some darn good reading. Not "disattached" at all. *G* So glad to be home! Julie

inspiring task with some how philosophical write, good luck