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This is a very pretty piece and has an enchanted magickal feeling to it! Wish there were more. Always, Cat

Delicate and perfect, I feel like treasuring it always. Cheers, Jess

this poem is everything a poem should be. so here you tiptoe as this poem tiptoes, quietly, secretly under my skin. Discreet, casual, and highly evoking imagery has roped me in here like that spidery web intended for the moon. Yours, ~Nina

Ah yes, you penned it very well Whitetea~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

one of the first I remember striking to see you again and read the fantasm that you craft Heart works superb and delicate strong machinery for the read tumbling down the chute to spill in the whirlpool of thoughts like stars naked on the blue tableau peircing and heated

This is so beautiful and so delicate and haunting. No idea what it's about could be so many things? It has a childlike quality something innocent and playful but it's also emotive, full of complex imagery. Sweet!

A delight to read, really refreshing.. wonderful in its gentleness & sensitivity & still it travels so firmly to the soul. I feel Vulpine has said it beautifully above. Well done & congrats Cheers Anni~ ` "Those who dwell among the beauties & mysteries of the earth are never alone or weary of life" ~ Rachel Carson Writer/conservationist

I like this. Very simple and no pretensions.

I love it also. It is the: lilywhite and wild eyed that really does it for me..... the pairing of the sounds of the words and such. great work -Nathaniel

that makes one think of some moonlit, nonhuman creature approaching one in the middle of the night without warning. this immediately struck like a crystallized piece of vision: rereadings were superfluous. terrifying beauty here. bravo

Welcome back, whitetea. Love the poem... it's the bare bones of a poet (nakedness) that makes a poem such as this. Thank you for sharing. (And I love naked truth...a la Sappho's poetry) ~A "You can avoid reality, but you cannot avoid the consequences of avoiding reality." Ayn Rand

One more I love it beautiful image. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara

immensely-captivating