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lighthearted

when the light
hits the heart
just so

everything
is
beauty



— Kailashana, Jul 27, 2009

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 10 months ago

Anna

Kind of like a prism, then? Nice little write, and I agree with the beautiful/beauty change. Beauty seems a little stronger in this case. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Sundown you better take care if I find you've been creepin' 'round my back stairs. Sometimes I think it's a sin when I feel like I'm winnin' when I'm losing again" - Gordon Lightfoot
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Thanks Jess… I’d be

Thanks Jess... I'd be proud to have you for a daughter, you like my poetry. jus' kidding... Hugs, Anna "You can avoid reality, but you cannot avoid the consequences of avoiding reality." Ayn Rand
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Sometimes it’s absolutely

Sometimes it's absolutely brilliant, other times it's clear as mud. ;-( Thanks for reading Cat.. Always, A "You can avoid reality, but you cannot avoid the consequences of avoiding reality." Ayn Rand
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

Now that is what I call perfect truth! (Simple, undeniable, mali

Now that is what I call perfect truth! (Simple, undeniable, maliable in mind) Succinctly expressed. Ahh Anna you are a goddess with a pen! & how timely! Cheers Anni~ ` "Those who dwell among the beauties & mysteries of the earth are never alone or weary of life" ~ Rachel Carson Writer/conservationist
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Actually, my pen is running

Actually, my pen is running out of ink, but the blood takes over. Wish I believed what I wrote sometimes. hahahaha. Hugs, A "You can avoid reality, but you cannot avoid the consequences of avoiding reality." Ayn Rand
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 10 months ago

Kailashana

I like your poem. They say essences and perfumes always come in small bottles. In this case is true. Thank you for the reminding. Hugo
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

You’re welcome Hugo…

You're welcome Hugo... these snippets come when they come.... I have written poems that have 5 or 6 parts, pages worth... and I have poems that are less than Haiku.. I have learned to skim through pages and pages of cerebral (dis)information in all subjects... the last two paragraphs are a perfect synopsis of the whole piece. Often I wonder, well, why didn't they just say so in the first place... But I suppose words are like foreplay... which just inspired me: Silence words are like foreplay reach the point of no return, begging us for more... ~A ;-) "You can avoid reality, but you cannot avoid the consequences of avoiding reality." Ayn Rand
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 10 months ago

Anna...

my first inclination was "beautiful" too, but somehow "beauty" does work... it makes the reader think about it more, instead of just falling off the tongue so without questions!!! or at least that is what I was thinking, and then I read your own comment and feel I totally got it... you took me too! thank you Richard