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Jul 27, 2009
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Smashed to Pieces
He took his first
Was only six
Friends were foes
Death was fixed
And where he sits
To this day
He remains the same
The same old slave
It's not just beer
It's not just scotch
It's not just whisky
He's not just lost
Cries for help
Well they are few
Thou shall not
Escape this feud
For his fuel
Is booze and drugs
A loss for love
An unfit glove
With holes and tears
Scars in life
Take time to fix
Some are light
Some so heavy
No light escapes
Personal black hole
His mind is baked
Yet with each sip
No thoughts will slip
Poems will come
He will not quit.
There will be days
When thoughts don't come
Until that time
I'll turn and run
— bloke, Jul 27, 2009
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Darby Cain
16 years 10 months ago
nice 1