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Jul 25, 2009
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Twilight
As day darkens shadows creep
fall beneath , the moon arrives
as my twilight dies .
Creatures of the night take flight
out of sight .
Footsteps, stumbling some one
mumbling, what hides in this
darkened path i walk,
Street lights wandering on a
string of torched light .
Dogs bark as i take the final exit
to where i will fall to my slumber
until this hidden world beckons .
— ziggy, Jul 25, 2009
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Candlewitch
17 years ago
Ziggy
ziggy
16 years 12 months ago
twilight
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Ziggy
ziggy
16 years 10 months ago
hi lyz
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