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the man in the blue shirt

Mid-day,

heat palpitating 
cicadas and a buzz
of green highways.

A city's heart always
remains despite
the best efforts
of elected officials

in the dirt.

A limp man
hair red as a
mirror unkissed;
the sticking liquor
a Colt 40. and some
other canned oblivion

The ladybugs creep
on his back, a sure sign
that mother nature shares
our feelings toward
this man.

and of course the cicadas sing
in passing tires and the sweaty
ring of cellphones passing by.

Though he is manifest, age,
burnt like Prometheus
from the sun, he is a child

who waits for a parent who will never
arrive.

He does not breathe,
he coughs in sputters
like gasoline gone wrong.

Don't touch him, that is what's
told when a voice rises,
don't touch him.

For God's sake, don't touch him.

And what did the ambulance say?

"He'd been here at least 7 hours."

and of course the cicadas sing
and the rings of the cellphones are
proposed to each new listener
who does not want to hear, or see.

For what is our cultural self but
a desertion of the child,
a betrayal of the other who
is ours--

"It ain't my fault",
his blearly companion
said without blinking an eye.

It was of course, and all of our faults.
Mine too.

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 9 months ago

Powerfully beautiful...

Your poem is a work of Art... Aside from the fact, that it is superbly well written; It touched my heart...with a divine touch. Very Beautiful... Raven
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 9 months ago

John

Very sad write. I had noticed that you repeated cicadas and cellphones - do they have a particular significance? ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Sundown you better take care if I find you've been creepin' 'round my back stairs. Sometimes I think it's a sin when I feel like I'm winnin' when I'm losing again" - Gordon Lightfoot
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Quillsvein1

16 years 9 months ago

Thank

you Raven! Yes, the cicadas and cellphone rings signify a kind of natural and technological indifference to this guy who was just dying in the midst of so many people--nature and people just keep marching on. It was also to set a mood for the poem as well. GB
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bjp

16 years 9 months ago

Dear quillsvein1,

This is quite an excellent poem. There are many many terrific images and metaphors: and of course the cicadas sing in passing tires and the sweaty ring of cellphones passing by. Though he is manifest, age, burnt like Prometheus from the sun, he is a child who waits for a parent who will never arrive. He does not breathe, he coughs in sputters like gasoline gone wrong. he coughs in sputters like gasoline gone wrong. It is a the best poem I have seen from your pen, although that many be thinner praise than the poem deserves since I have not read too many of your poems. I would be interested to see this skill directed away from moral criticism toward joy or self or the beauty of ugliness (much as the poem relies upon ugly images beautifully shaped to gain its power), to mention but a few examples. Brian
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Quillsvein1

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you

very much Brian. Yeah, I'd like to see my poems express more joy also. I'm acutely conscious of that. One cannot always control the muse I suppose. GB