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Jul 24, 2009
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Moaning and Groaning
Tweet, tweet, tweeting happily do they sing
water they do drink
from their green cup leafs
Flap, flap, flapping, your little feathered wings
dancing in the shade
of the grand oak tree,
Work, work, working, to nest upon this tree
to the highest branch
for not an eye to see,
Sit, sit, sitting, trying to hatch your eggs
three little fledgling
born upon this day,
Feed, feed, feeding, tweeting little birds
soon there will be air
beneath your baby wings,
Fly, fly, flying, as far as you can go
trying to start a nest
beyond your families own,
Cry, cry, crying, how hard it is for me
I listen to the birds
who never seem to moan?
Try, try, trying to make it on my own
maybe take a lesson
from the birds who never groan?
water they do drink
from their green cup leafs
Flap, flap, flapping, your little feathered wings
dancing in the shade
of the grand oak tree,
Work, work, working, to nest upon this tree
to the highest branch
for not an eye to see,
Sit, sit, sitting, trying to hatch your eggs
three little fledgling
born upon this day,
Feed, feed, feeding, tweeting little birds
soon there will be air
beneath your baby wings,
Fly, fly, flying, as far as you can go
trying to start a nest
beyond your families own,
Cry, cry, crying, how hard it is for me
I listen to the birds
who never seem to moan?
Try, try, trying to make it on my own
maybe take a lesson
from the birds who never groan?
— Eduardo Cruz, Jul 24, 2009
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Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Hey, Eddie, I did a lot of
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 10 months ago
Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Lol. Eddie… “sit, sit,
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 10 months ago
thanks sweetie,
hugo la rosa
16 years 10 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 10 months ago
Hugo,