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Jul 24, 2009
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Beautiful
Beautiful
it was a typical
hospital room
lights......tubes....
the soft hummmmmm
of an oxygen machine
nurses coming
and going
just before she died
........as the names
of things started
to evaporate...
she raised up....
...looked around
the room with
soft baby eyes
and said:
"Beautiful"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
They came...
friends and friends
of friends, relatives,
old lovers,
children and grandchildren
one last look
at her image,
as if death must be
formalized with flowers
and copper coffin
her last tender touch
i felt on my cheek
flowers waved
as she walked by
her name was Beauty
and she died an untimely death.
it was a typical
hospital room
lights......tubes....
the soft hummmmmm
of an oxygen machine
nurses coming
and going
just before she died
........as the names
of things started
to evaporate...
she raised up....
...looked around
the room with
soft baby eyes
and said:
"Beautiful"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
They came...
friends and friends
of friends, relatives,
old lovers,
children and grandchildren
one last look
at her image,
as if death must be
formalized with flowers
and copper coffin
her last tender touch
i felt on my cheek
flowers waved
as she walked by
her name was Beauty
and she died an untimely death.
— Kailashana, Jul 24, 2009
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themoonman
16 years 10 months ago
Anna...
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
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Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Beautiful , both of them …
Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
poignantly beautiful!
hugo la rosa
16 years 10 months ago
Kailashana
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you for reading