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Fleur MacDonald
Fleur MacDonald
Jul 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Delight

Let your feelings see
the vision as before
beneath the calming sea
as it will be forever more

Let your thirsty pain
remember how it was
fall hard against it's grain
and damn it to it's core

Let your hearing cheer
to sound of chirping song
will scare away the fear
of a chemo fighting Kong

Let your taste remember
of a song once eaten
back maybe in December
when you were almost beaten

Let your spoken note
prepare us for a fall
you'll pick us all up
and help us stand tall

Let your written word
walk towards the light
while you are sitting
in the garden of delight

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Fleur

This is so beautiful ... I wanted to leave a longer message sort of had my hands full when I got your text ... (hug) thank you sooooo much you made my day after an absolute bastard of a week this is priceless to me ... I have said it for a while here, I feel I have made friends that will last for a lifetime , your wonderful woman and and beautiful human being ,I am glad I found a friend like you, its people that make life (when things get tough ?) easier to cope with ... no amount of money on the face of this planet could make me trade my friends I am blessed big time .... Big Love Jayne-Chloe x x ((((((((((((((((((HUGZZZZZZZZZZZ)))))))))))))))))) Mwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :)
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Just had to come back and

Just had to come back and read this again Fleur ... I was feeling blue and this made me smile it is really beautiful ... Love and hugz Jayne x x
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Fleur

What a beauty. Enjoyed the depth in this one. It actually has a feel of a pick me up. Well I feel nice inside, so it worked. Loved it. Lyz. XX