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Jul 23, 2009
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The Cedar Tree
Growing up where I did hope was tangible.
There was the pain, sadness of events,
the dreariness of the fog, damp cold a constant.
My Dad would say with a laugh,
"don't like the weather just wait the wind will switch it."
Sure enough, the wind would kick up
the fog would be gone.
Followed by sunny blue skies.
Smiles all around.
One day my Dad took me to see a special tree.
We took a long hike up a rocky slope
to find this tree, to make a pilgrimage.
I think what struck hope into me
was defined by a cedar tree, gnarled, twisted,
majestic, alone, growing out of a rock
on a cliff above the great lake.
Growing, thriving in unforgiving circumstances
taking everything that nature could throw at it.
Yet still it lived.
Beautiful in its tenacity to survive.
I shared my Dad's fascination with that tree.
I thought to myself if a seed can
find what it needs out of a rock,
I guess I can too.
— raskin, Jul 23, 2009
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Critiques
themoonman
16 years 10 months ago
Hi Raskin
wizzardofodd
16 years 10 months ago
Pretty darn good
raskin
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you two for the comments
wizzardofodd
16 years 10 months ago
I’d use quotes or line
raskin
16 years 10 months ago
good suggestion
blistered-pen
16 years 10 months ago
excellent last thought
Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
Nice uplifting theme!
raskin
16 years 10 months ago
Thanks Bonita j
hugo la rosa
16 years 10 months ago
Raskin
raskin
16 years 10 months ago
Thanks Hugo
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Oh you too love trees, they are what I turn to in distress
raskin
16 years 2 months ago
They depict grace and