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docmaverick
docmaverick
Jul 23, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

The Dance in the Meadow

To greet out there
is something rare
no one could've known,

You're beautiful
and wonderful
and just look how you have grown.

Happenstance
gave lowly me the chance
to dance with you, this day;

I had to laugh
and take a photograph
I care not, what others say.

I felt so healed
out in that field
watching your antics, under the sun;

It seems to me
that you've set me free
I am such the "lucky one"!

Now, day grows old
it's getting cold
and evening soon, is nigh;

this had to end
my little friend
my dancing butterfly.
— docmaverick, Jul 23, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Lonnie

17 years ago

You get 4 stars from me for 'The Butterfly Effect'!

Yeah, I know that's not the title, but it reminds me a lot of the premise that the movie was based on! How little things can produce changes in our very existance is, to me, what this poem signifies! Nicely penned!
Seren

Seren

17 years ago

I loved dancing in the field

I loved dancing in the field with you an your flutterbye :P it was a delightful Doc and I agree with Lonnie the small things effecting change had already struck me before I even scrolled down to read his comment the message I got was exactly that ... regards Jayne x :)
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Antoinette Mar…

17 years ago

I Loved this Doc...it reminded me of.....

a writing of yours...a while back- can't recall when...but it was called "The pedestran" I believe...about a moth...excellent write
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years ago

The Dance

Doc Thanks for sharing your "dance" I enjoyed it~ ____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

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