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Jul 23, 2009
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when you come tomorrow/a phonecall part 2.
When you come tomorrow,
Don’t be sad.
I do not long to see myself,
Reflected in your misted eyes.
I will not reflect you
In the mist of mine.
When you come tomorrow,
Leave all bullshit and drama
At my wrought iron gate
Bring your authentic self,
With the grey flecks in your beard
make deceit flee
with the rawness of you
When you come tomorrow,
Take me passionately or not at all
Don’t speak, if it kills the
sparking doorway to
heaven or hell
When you come tomorrow.
— aquarian phoenix, Jul 23, 2009
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yenti
17 years ago
Phoenix
aquarian phoenix
17 years ago
Greetings again, and thank
yenti
17 years ago
Hi
aquarian phoenix
17 years ago
bring your authentic
Grieta Lindeque
17 years ago
Raw
aquarian phoenix
17 years ago
Thank you for stopping
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