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Jul 21, 2009
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Sliced Bindings
How did it feel
to slide the knife in?
Did it heat blood
to trick with a grin ?
Opening my heart
and letting you in,
was the start to regret
as my trust rescinds
Friendly you were
kindness was shown,
all this facade
I’m here to bemoan
Sharing my life
family and friends,
all this being used
for subtle ends
Gave you the breath
that flows inside,
but all this time
you lived one big lie
And finally to find
your full of shit,
How does it feel ?
To look a right tit
Nice to my face
you sneer at my back,
sometimes I think
I’d give you a smack
But lower myself ?
I never ever will,
I’ll leave that to you,
It gives such a thrill
— Seren, Jul 21, 2009
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Candlewitch
17 years ago
Sweet Jayne
Seren
17 years ago
Cat
Bonitaj
17 years ago
Wow Jayne!
Seren
17 years ago
Boni
Candlewitch
17 years ago
I Like
Seren
17 years ago
LOL it came to me just a
themoonman
17 years ago
Sliced Bindings...
Seren
17 years ago
Thank you Richard I wrote
Quillsvein1
17 years ago
wow
Seren
17 years ago
GB
Geezer
17 years ago
Sliced Bindings
Seren
17 years ago
LMAO … Gee big smiles I
Geezer
17 years ago
I am assuming
Seren
17 years ago
Gee
Neuro11
17 years ago
I think that betrayal is a
Seren
17 years ago
Betrayal is an ugly thing
Neuro11
17 years ago
Thank you, you’re much too
Seren
17 years ago
Maybe ? ;) but I like what I
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