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Jul 21, 2009
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Sliced Bindings
How did it feel
to slide the knife in?
Did it heat blood
to trick with a grin ?
Opening my heart
and letting you in,
was the start to regret
as my trust rescinds
Friendly you were
kindness was shown,
all this facade
I’m here to bemoan
Sharing my life
family and friends,
all this being used
for subtle ends
Gave you the breath
that flows inside,
but all this time
you lived one big lie
And finally to find
your full of shit,
How does it feel ?
To look a right tit
Nice to my face
you sneer at my back,
sometimes I think
I’d give you a smack
But lower myself ?
I never ever will,
I’ll leave that to you,
It gives such a thrill
— Seren, Jul 21, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
Sweet Jayne
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Cat
Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
Wow Jayne!
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Boni
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
I Like
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
LOL it came to me just a
themoonman
16 years 10 months ago
Sliced Bindings...
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you Richard I wrote
Quillsvein1
16 years 10 months ago
wow
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
GB
Geezer
16 years 10 months ago
Sliced Bindings
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
LMAO … Gee big smiles I
Geezer
16 years 10 months ago
I am assuming
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Gee
Neuro11
16 years 10 months ago
I think that betrayal is a
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Betrayal is an ugly thing
Neuro11
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you, you’re much too
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Maybe ? ;) but I like what I